[Denied] My Application Creepercrusher9

[Creepercrusher9 0]

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: My Minecraft name is Creepercrusher9

How old are you?: I am 12 years old nearly 13

Are you aware the server is PG-13?: I am aware the server is PG-13 but I'm used to swearing and stuff

Have you applied for this server before?: No I have not.

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes I have

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: Structures that defy the laws of physics, underground or automated farms/furnaces, floating leaves and strip-mining, are not allowed. That is the one I agree with.

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): No there are not any rules that confuse me

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: From a friend called sgtchestshot.

In game information:

What is your characters name?: Creeps Wellington Jefferson

Characters gender: Male

Characters race: Elf

Characters age: 48

Characters biography: Creeps Jefferson is an elf who was born to a poor elf family who were forced out of their homes by Dwarves. Creeps cared about his family so he made his own sword and started mercenary work to pay off his family's debt. By the age of 31 he had joined a group to assassinate Jon Jackle's father. Jon Jackle was spared and got away. Creeps regretted not killing that man himself but he needed to for his parents' debt. Jon Jackle met Creeps again and Jon thanked Creeps for sparing his life. They both became friends and helped each other with fights.

He went to tell his family that he got the money. He saw that a mysterious man walk away from his parents' tent. He looked inside and his parents were covered in blood and dead. He heard his mother whisper "Don't worry about me," and she coughed up one last drop of blood and died. Creeps swore revenge on whoever killed his family. He didn't realise but what happened to him is what happened to Jon Jackle. Creeps searched the lands for that unknown murderer. He searched until he was 48 and then there he is now still searching for his family's killer.

Personality traits: He gets angry with anyone who doesn't obey which leads to him being wanted in 27 different towns.

Ambitions: He has a desire to find the killer of his parents.

Strengths/talents: He has very good stealth skills and has a precise aim with a bow.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Being caught and he has the inability to use heavy armour and weapons.

Appearance: 6foot9" tall and 180lbs. He will always wear something black to hide himself in the dark. He uses black battle paint around his eyes and has blue eyes.

My characters skin: http://prntscr.com/70pvd4

Definitions:

What is a role play?: Where you act a fictional character with other people to make a story.

What is meta gaming?: Where you find out information on social media not on the role play.

What is power gaming?: Where you are stronger than your character.

I hope you enjoy my application

;) -Creepercrusher9

[James 425]

Your application is

 

 

You are not aloud to re-apply until 24 hours pass upon denial.

 

Your application has been denied for the following reasons:

• Your metagaming and powergaming definitions are both incorrect.
• Your application is in the wrong format order. 
• Your biography needs server lore, which can be found on the wiki (here) http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Front+Page
• Why would Dwarves force an elf out of their home?
• Your family being killed and swearing revenge is very cliche. 
• Change your ambitions with the above change.
• Expand on your characters personality traits
• Where did your character gain his skill with a sword, who was he trained by?

If you have any questions or concerns feel free to send me a PM!

[James 425]

Moved to Denied Application Forum.