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[snowyknight141 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?:Snowyknight141

How old are you?:15

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):yes

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications):yes, here is link: https://www.lordofth...02-application/

Have you read and agreed to the rules?:yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?:The "no hacking rule" because i hate hackers to.

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): The pvp rules are a bit confusing.

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: i found it when searching for servers on a minecraft server list website.

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: Roleplaying is when someone takes on a role and they change thier personality, appearance and so on to suit the role they are roleplaying as.

What is metagaming?: Metagaming is when a player thinks of a stratagy in a game. For an example a faction leader in minecraft factions might think of a stratagy to defeat and enemy faction.

What is powergaming?: Powergaming is when someone trys hard and does what is nesisary to reach a specific goal in a game.

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: Snowy

Character’s gender: Male

Character’s race: Human

Character’s age: 18

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):

     Snowy was a young boy born in the realm of Aegis. He lived a hard but happy life with his grandfather after his parents passes when thier carrage was attacked by bandits on a trip to a neer by town, leaving Snowy and his brother Cloud to live with thier grandfather. Snowy has always been talented in the art of swordsplay and often practiced with Cloud. They lived in a small town wich very little to do besides farming. He would occasionaly go hiking with his grandfather and brother or go hunting in the woods. He also enjoyed listening to Cloud tell him about healing magic that he read about in books. Snowy was a young boy with big dreams of becoming an adventuer, traveling the land with allys and his brother.

   One horrable day the undeads attacked his b=village killing his grandfather and burning it to the ground. The only survivors where him and his brother. They wandered for days on end trying to reach a neer by town, but every town or settlement they went through where also raided and distroyed by the undead. From that day on him and his brother set out to seak revenge for thier village and thier grandfather.

Personality Traits: Brave, rarly backed down from a fight. 

Ambitions: To get revenge for his grandfather and to become and adventurer

Strengths/Talents: Skills with the sword

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Not the best with bows

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): Tall brown haired boy who liked to wear black and blue.

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here): Link to pic of my skin on imgur: http://imgur.com/gallery/eBLGV72/new

 

 

[Jonificus 2763]

 

You have 24 hours to rectify the point(s) below, message me when this is done or if you have any questions or concerns.

 

• Your meta and powergaming definitions are incorrect.
• We're in Athera now, Snowy would've been too young to have been born in Aegis.
• The 'bandits came and killed my X' story is cliche.
• There's a lack of lore in your biography.
• Strengths and weaknesses are vague, same with the personality traits.

 

Good luck, and I'll see ya later!

I suggest checking out our wiki or the new player guides if you haven't already, they're a great tool for applicants.

 

You have been denied for reason(s) pointed out below, message me if you have any questions or concerns. You may re-apply after 24 hours have passed.

 

• No changes have been made within the time given.

Please check out our wiki and the new player guides if you haven't already, they're a great tool for applicants.

[Jonificus 2763]

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