[Denied] Applacation

[аndrew 12]

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?:XpWhoDey

How old are you?:13

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):yes

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications):No (sorry)

Have you read and agreed to the rules?:yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?:MetaGaming

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules):no but thanks for asking!

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?Yotube

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?:Acting out a roll while adapting to the community

What is metagaming?: using info about someone that your character wouldnt know.

What is powergaming?:Taking control not giving the other person to have a chance *Slices XpWhoDey as he drop's to the floor unconcious* 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name:Andrew

Character’s gender:boy

Character’s race: elf

Character’s age:18

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):  He was born one day in petrus and then his mom was poor and about to die in her house in aegis!  So she worked to keep him alive worked and worked they fed him and got him drank's Then his mom heard horns! A few years later his mom died and his dad died to! He was alone so he had to live on his own he was 5 and washing his clothes and getting his own food and drank's but just then he saw aenguls and daemons wash up on the shore he was terrified!He gets back to work then he see's Ibless stand for the last time!  Now he just needs parents. So he thinks of jobs then it hits him!

 

5 years later he is a Comedian he sits outside trying to make people laugh for money! One day a person gave him blanket's and food to survive for  2 days.  5 days later the man dies and no one is laughing at him besides 1 person who is popular!! He thinks he will bring his friends. The next day he booed and throu things  at him so no money and needs a few dollar's to buy things from the food shop from then on out he tries to find parents in that process the ancient history he was scared all the way through but he grows up to be 18 and still looking for parents! 

Personality Traits:Comedian

Ambitions:try to get 10 people to laugh

Strengths/Talents:Shooting

Weaknesses/Inabilities:Swimming/Popularity 

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight):height:6.5 weight: 1 block

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guidehere): http://www.minecraftskins.com/skin/5859703/elf-male/

[Harri 4815]

Unfortunately, you’ve been denied.

The following reasons behind this are as follows:

• Your definitions are rather short and un-detailed. Try go over them and detail/describe them some more in your next application.
• Your bio is rather short, and doesn't contain correct/ much lore at all. Your parents couldn't of been living in Aegis, when you were also born in Petrus. The continent and the city are hundreds of years apart, so you also couldn't of been around at the time either, if you were only 18. Go over the wiki, look up more relevant lore, and try to make your bio more detailed and have more of a point.
• You say  your height is 6,5 but you don't specifically say which elf you are applying as. The realistic option would be a High-elf, due to them being taller. Also, you don't weigh '1 block' you weigh any normal weight, such as Pounds or Kilograms.
   

If you’d like any help doing your application once more, feel free to contact me. I’ll happily try and lend my assistance.

[Harri 4815]

Moved to Denied Application Forum.