[Denied] Hikari Kenshin App

[Venomoo 109]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: Venom1256

How old are you?: 13

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): yes

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications): no

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: modshopping

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): no

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? It was recommended to me by NJBB

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: Using one's imagination to play as a specific character.

What is metagaming?: Using out of character knowledge to complete a specific task. 

What is powergaming?: Sacrificing roleplay for maximum power

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: Hikari Kenshin 

Character’s gender: male

Character’s race: High Elf

Character’s age:58

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.): Hikari was born and raised in the town of  Haelun'or as an orphan. He never met his parents and the caretakers told him that they found him abandoned in an alleyway. When he turned 49 he ran away from the orphanage, seeking the adventures of the rest of the world. While he was looking around Laureh'lin he noticed some mages doing some type of magic. He was in awe when he saw them casting marvelous spells. This inspired him to learn the art of magic. He then seeked the magic that was most powerful. 

 

He found that Necromancy best satisfied his desires. It seemed very powerful and would let him have control over the dead. He continues to search every city in search of a teacher to learn this magnificent art. At age 54 he has still not found a single teacher to learn the art of Necromancy from, however he does not give up his search.On his travel back to his hometown, Haelun'or, he found a broken down carriage on the side of the path. He decided to go toward it and see if someone was in need of assistance. He found a very scared dark elfish woman. Hikari asked her what was wrong.She laughed as bandits revealed themselves from behind the carriage. Hikari knew he couldn't win a four on one fight so he decided to run away. The bandits quickly caught up to him and threw him painfully to the ground. He became unconscious as they pummeled him.When he woke up he found that he had been robbed of everything he had on him except for his clothes which were now in rags. Now at age 58 he seeks even more desperately for a teacher so he can find the bandits once more and end their lives.

Personality Traits: adaptable, decisive, challenging, curious, dedicated, and stubborn

Ambitions: power and control

Strengths/Talents: gift of magic, decisive, 

Weaknesses/Inabilities: can't use bows, dislikes heavy armor

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): 6.3ft / 132lb

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here): http://imgur.com/B28YDyd

[mitto 2312]

 

Your definitions aren't incorrect but they're too short. Please expand on them and possibly give examples.

 

Your biography is a bit strange. Haelun'or is probably one of the safest places to grow up due to it's isolationism. If you were orphaned you probably wouldn't have grown up in Haelun'or either.

 

Getting revenge is a bit of a cliché

 

Your personality traits, strengths and weaknesses weren't even touched on in your biography. Why are they there? What events in your life have made them so?

 

You can re apply in 24 hours

[mitto 2312]

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