[Denied] Whitelist Application.

[LovelyMonkey554 0]

What's your Minecraft account name?: LovelyMonkey554

How old are you?: 14

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications): No

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: No cyberbullying

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): No

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: My friends

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: The acting out or performance of a particular role, taking on a whole new character

What is metagaming?: Use of Knowledge that the character doesn't know of

What is powergaming?: Forcing an action against another player

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: Ghorza

Character’s gender: Female

Character’s race: Orc

Character’s age: 52

Biography (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):
My life started when my mother gave birth to me in the Orcish capital within the laughter and klomps of other Orcs , I couldn't have asked for anywhere better to live. I do not know where my mother and father went after my 10th birthday, everything seemed fine at first. But that's when everything changed, they went missing and I have no clue what happened to them or where they could have went. But, I will investigate to have some closure.
 I had always been a curious girl, my mother when I was younger called me her curious Orc. And maybe that's why I always wondered what my dad did for a living. My father was an great alchemist especially for an Uruk. I wanted to follow in his foot steps before he left, but he never could show me he would say your to young or you could hurt yourself! But knowing myself I did it anyways. My mom was a breeder which is why I want to become a professional breeder I love animals and always will, especially horses!

Personality Traits: Brave, Funny, Strong, Selfless

Ambitions: Becoming a great Breeder and Alchemist

Strengths/Talents: Flexible, Great Reflexes, Agile

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Merciful, Unstable when drunk

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): my height is 7 foot, weight is 200 pounds, I'm a Dark blue Orc, beautiful (for an orc).

Skin: http://tinypic.com/r/1z3q9hg/8

 

 

[tilly 5115]

 

Hello applicant. You've been denied for the following reasons:

• You have plagiarized/copied word-for-word the definitions of roleplaying/metagaming/powergaming! This is your first warning.
• Make sure that you contain more references to the lore, such as the place your character grew up in, or where he/she has traveled to or aspires to go to. Also, try including more historical things that your character could have witnessed (like the giant worm attack in Athera!) - check out the wiki if you need to.
• The skin you have selected is not appropriate for the type of character that you wish to play. 

You may reapply in twenty four hours.

If you need any help, feel free to PM me or ask for help in the WS chat in-game.

Good luck!

[tilly 5115]

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