[Denied] Arkan apply

[Arkan 1]

MInecraft name :Mr_Packmen

Im 16 

yes i know that the serve is PG-13

i reed the rules and i agrred

i found aut by youtebe

rollplay is play as if you were tha character

metagaming is know the lord and uset 

powergaming is like the story line but every one work on it

 

character info

character name Arkan 

character sex male

character race human

character age 20

biography Arkan were a boy and lived with is family mother and father in a city the family dind have a lot of money and the father were a drunk men and bit Arkan and were mom wit a torch every day so Arkan got a fear of the light .

One day Arkan s father come home more drunk then ever and bit Arkan mother to death Arkan pikd a knife and kill is father 

Arkan aged to 15 living in the woods hiding at the day and hunting at night he become a myth of the woods as a monter that kill anythig in the woods at 18 he weend to the city for the first time in 8 years at night time and he see a men beating a kid he run at him and cuts hes neck and go away.

personality traits : hates bad parents short fuse

Ambiitions ; raise a family

talents : sneaky and ranged weaponds

weknesses :light

apperance:height 1.75m weight 60kl

 

[tilly 5115]

Under review.

[tilly 5115]

Hello applicant, you have been denied for the following reasons:

• You might want to take a look at all of your definitions - feel free to look it up, but remember to put it into your own words!
• Make sure that you contain more references to the lore, such as the place your character grew up in, or where he/she has traveled to or aspires to go to. Also, try including more historical things that your character could have witnessed (like the giant worm attack in Athera!) - check out the wiki if you need to.
• You must use the application format that we provide for you - click here to view it.
• You have failed to attach a skin! If you need help with getting a screenshot, follow this guide.
• Please improve the quality of your application because I do not feel you understand what is required in order to role-play on this server!

You may reapply in twenty four hours.

If you need any help, feel free to PM me or ask for help in the WS chat in-game.

Good luck!

[tilly 5115]

Moved to Denied Application Forum.