[Denied] Application for Dain StormHammer (Edit backstory)

[Raignar 0]

Out-Of-Character Information:

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name: Raignar

How old are you: 16

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?:i agree with them all

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense : NO

(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules):

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? 

 

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: roleplaying is that you play a person that you want to be (created, for example with your fantasy) and be that person .just like acting ;)

What is metagaming?:you use real information for in game character

What is powergaming?: that you make YOUR character OverPowerd

 

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: Dain StormHammer

Character’s sex:     Male

Character’s race:   Dwarf

Character’s age:   59

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):

A strong, Young Dwarf who not easily trust others. because he was captured when he was 26 years old

and kept enslaved for 23 years. from master to master to master etc........ until a old man had bought him and say.......... You are free my Boy. come i take you to the monasteries where i live and so on at the age of 49 he started to train inside the monasteries with martial arts and he goes evry day huntig to train with bow and arrow and practice with weapons (his favorite Weapons are ,war axe and the short bow)

hours became days, days become weeks and weeks become years... now he is at the age of 59 and he is ready and goes to get his revenge on the slave masters.. but  in his own he can't do it... so he goes on a journey looking for allies     AND SO MY STORY BEGINS.....

 

 

 

Personality Traits: friendly  but only  to his friends .         Hard to convinc, 

 

Ambitions: to get friends (the ones he never had) and revenge on the slave masters

 

Strengt9hs/Talents:

loyal::   to people who wish him wel (and If he thrust them) 

 

master of martial art

expert with bow and war axe

 

Weaknesses/Inabilities:

lonely man:   just not a great talker  

Alcoholic,:  love STRONG ALE, but get easy drunk (but in a good way, not aggressive)

fear to be a Slave again (he would rather die)

 

 

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight):

Height: 4.7 feet

Weight 190 pound

blue eye's

brown hair

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here):

Edited October 25, 2015 by Raignar

[James 425]

Your application is

You are not allowed to re-apply until 24 hours pass upon denial.

Your application has been denied for the following reasons:

• Your meta-gaming and powergaming definitions need to be clarified upon.
• Your biography isn't long enough.
• Your biography completely lacks server lore which can be found on the wiki or by asking myself. http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Front+Page
• Please try to fix the many grammar mistakes within your application, it makes it very hard to read. 
• Expand on strengths and weaknesses 

If you have any questions or concerns feel free to send me a PM!

Edited October 26, 2015 by James

[James 425]

Moved to Denied Application Forum.