[Denied] New player

[greengas 0]

 

 

 

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and

writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: DeathGamerVP
How old are you?: 12
Are you aware the server is PG-13 : Yes
Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes
What’s the rule you agree with the most?: No use of hacked clients such as xrray .

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): no

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: A YouTube trailer.

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

What is role-playing?:In my opinion role-playing is where you take up a character and play as him in a performance or in a game and you also take his skill and his personality.

 

What is meta-gaming?: is any strategy or action used in a game

What is power-gaming?: interacting with games like video games, boardgames and more.

In-Character Information
Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

Character’s name: Greyleaf

Character’s sex: male
Character’s race: elf
Character’s age: 76

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradiction history.):

pore Grayleaf got lost in the wood and now has to find his way back to his friend house witch was in duchy of istria. he was raised by his mother and his father died in war with humans.he will now revenge for what they did to his dad.Many years later he became a worrier who was the fastest in the clan of elf's.Grayleaf  got a task to do from the king witch he sadly he did not do the quest and now got sent away from his mother by chucking him in the forest of blood barrys.he wondered in the forest as blood Barry were his only way to be dehydrated and say alive for many weeks. his lost.

Grayleaf has to find his friend by taking a guess were is west. he soon finds a river. he ten follows the river and appearers in a town he looks around and asks a stranger to bring him to his friend. the stranger agrees and brings him home on his donkey.Grayleaf arrives to his friend with no food or water for 3 days. his friend feeds him and caries his to bed.he told the story and now got a team member to revenge the humans at the same day they killed his father.

 

Personality Traits: He likes adventures and likes being with a friend, Likes to get fit.

Ambitions: Trys to parkour and be as silent as a mouse.

Strengths/Talents: Fast at running jumping and can hold his breath more than 5 min.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: cant hold more than 70kg

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight):

 

weight: 45KG

hight:1.65 meters

Skin: Fair

Body: muscled enough to wield a large sword

Eyes:Green like a septiceye

Hair: very black

 

Appearance, please provide us a screen-shot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screen-shot guide here):

 

 

 

 

 

Edited November 9, 2015 by greengas

[tilly 5115]

Hello, applicant. You've been denied for the following reasons:

• You might want to take a look at your definition of metagaming, and also powergaming - feel free to look it up, but remember to put it into your own words!
• Make sure that you contain more references to the lore, such as the place your character grew up in, or where he/she has traveled to or aspires to go to. Also, try including more historical things that your character could have witnessed (like the giant worm attack in Athera!) - check out the wiki if you need to.
• When writing your character's biography, please refrain from using the cliche of 'my parents were killed and now I am orphaned'.
• Please improve the quality of your application because I do not feel you understand what is required in order to role-play on this server!

 

You may reapply in twenty four hours.

If you need any help, feel free to PM me or ask for help in the WS chat in-game.

Good luck!

 

[tilly 5115]

Moved to Denied Application Forum.