[Denied] Talia's Whitelist Application (Zydrah)

[Talia-chan 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: Zydrah

How old are you?: 19

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes.

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes.

What’s the rule you agree with the most?:

It is the responsibility of the player to maintain understanding of the existing rules as the Staff Teams update them.

 

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): No

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? Through a server finder.

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: changing behavior to assume a role of a character, either created or not.

What is metagaming?:  use of OOC knowledge in IC situations

What is powergaming?: see- godmodding, etc, forcing an action onto another playing

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: Talia

Character’s sex: Female

Character’s race: Elf

Character’s age: 24

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):

This once haughty, independent high elf was born into a simple alchemist family in The Citadel. The plague that struck their immediate family due to the volcanic ash rushed them to look for antidotes on unfamiliar land, where not many of their kind had gone before. While boating off their island, a storm struck in the waters and caused them to crashland onto the shore of The Iron Uzg.

Her parents were nowhere to be found, and upon waking from the crash, two burly Uruks loomed over her. Talia's scream for help was muffled by the quick hands of the Uruk's, as she was taken captive, and now serves as a slave for whatever the Uruk's need her for.

Personality Traits: Submissive, Aloof, Docile

Ambitions: Be as helpful as possible, possibly figure her families whereabouts

Strengths/Talents: Highly Flexible for her race

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Inability to rebel, obeys at any cost (though, could be considered a strength)

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): Platinum blonde hair, long, pointy ears, lush, red lips, cerulean colored eyes.

Height: 6'2" 

Weight: 190 lbs

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here):

 

 

Edited December 16, 2015 by Talia-chan
took "skin" literally

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Under review.

[Imi 425]

Denied.
Your app has been denied for the following reason:

-All three of your definitions were plaigerised. Plaigerism is not allowed when making applications, therefore you will need to wait 24 hours before reapplying. This is a warning. The next time plagiarism is found it will be a week ban from applying per definition.

-You did not state what sub type of elf you will be playing. I will link the elven wiki for you to decide which you would like to play.
http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Elves

-Your backstory is very generic. I'd suggest changing it to something more original than having dead/missing parents, but it's up to you on that one.

You must wait 24 hours before reapplying. If you have any questions or need any help, feel free to contact me.

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Moved to Denied Application Forum.