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[loner27neil 0]

Out-Of-Character Information
Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!
 
What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: loner27neil
How old are you?: 14
Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): yes
Have you read and agreed to the rules?: yes
What’s the rule you agree with the most?: the war rule to not cause pointless wars
Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): no
How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? my friend Bryce (BryceTheShark)
 
Definitions
Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!
 
What is roleplaying?: to have fun in a world that is not ours and be a new person with your friends
What is metagaming?: to use strategy and methof in a game with a specified ruleset
What is powergaming?: a style of interaction with games
 
In-Character Information
Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.
 
Character’s name: Okthlar 
Character’s sex: male
Character’s race: Orc
Character’s age: 27
Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.): as a child in the mists of the oncoming war between orcs and humans my camp was attacked by human knights they were looking for an escaped war prisoner and were raiding any camp in sight. they pillaged our homes stole out gold and treaures for there own profit killed our guards and took my family my neighbors and my best friend and i to poles in the middle of there castle. they had bows aimed at our heads with targets on our chest drawn in wet red paint still fresh dripping down my chest they killed my neighbors fisrts then my mother and father then my best friend they were about to end me with one single shot thats all it would really take for a younger orc though it did take three or four for my father and my neighbor Gannoshi. my mother died in two but one for me and my friend. just as the arrow was being drawn a man tackled down the owner of the bow to the floor and began screaming at the general in charge of this operation he quickly ran over to me and cut me loose of the roped restraining me of escape i ran. through a small hole able to crawl through i was able to escape the wrath of these humans. i dont truly remember his name but i do remember his first name iemes. i later joined the orcish army to fight back against the humans and reclaim the land that was once mine though many battles lost and many won i still strive to find this man and give him the greatest honor possible under the little authority i have in this war i will kill and pillage till i find him.
Personality Traits: tough ruthless and will never back down from a fight 
Ambitions: to find iemes and reward him for saving my life
Strengths/Talents: considered the greatest warrior in many cities and towns is very talented in the arena and at persuading and minipulating situations
Weaknesses/Inabilities: not that intelligent is blind in the left  eye
Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): green skin one chipped tooth  blind from left eye with a battle scar over that same eye 6,4 weighs 167 pounds
Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here): http://prntscr.com/9fwir4

 

[CheekyNolan 5420]

• Your definition on roleplaying could be more detailed or extended.
• Your definition of powergaming and metagaming are wrong, please update them to the correct definition.
• Your biography has little to no server lore, this can be found here: http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Front+Page. Please add some in.
• You cannot be a renowned warrior or fighter in many towns before having been implemented and actually started roleplaying.

You have 24 hours to make the following changes. If you have any questions or comments, please feel free to PM me!

[CheekyNolan 5420]

• You did not make the necessary changes within 24 hours.

Please re-apply in 24 hours. If you have any questions or comments, please feel free to PM me!

 

 

[CheekyNolan 5420]

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