[Denied] [Pending]ItsAriza Application

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Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: ItsAriza

How old are you?: 13

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes 

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: Cyberbulling 

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): No

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? My friend told me

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: Roleplaying is not acting yourself, then making your role and your act. Like actors, they act the heroes, some other people etc.

What is metagaming?: Metagaming is abusing (using) something that your character won't know about. Like, the real example is : Hobbit movie, Bilbo go and see the other hobbit working, and he say to him ''Come to TeamSpeak/Skype/Facebook''. 

What is powergaming?: Powergaming is something that you do IG, and can't be done IRL. You can't act like you are Superman, can you? :)

The other definition of PG is forcing other player on something that he won't do. :)

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: Zamîn Rulasfart

Character’s sex: Male 

Character’s race: Heartlander (Human)

Character’s age: 31

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):

Zamîn was born in town Felsen, in Kingdom of Oren. He was living with his parents, and he was the only child. When he was a kid, he was extremely shy and he had no friends. He always wanted to become an archer.

 

His mother was really sick, and she was hiding from him that she couldn't have more kids. Zamîn was living in lie, his almost whole life... He started to go to school and he was a straight A student. Parents were forcing him to get good grades. He was still extremely shy and he couldn't make any friends. His only friends was his mother and his father. He was chasing his dream as hard as he can.

 

After few years, when Zamîn had nineteen, his mother died. That is the feeling he felt for the first time in his life, and that was THE MOTHER, the most loved women in your life. He couldn't do it, and he started to cry. His whole life turned around to black. His father was a blacksmith, and he made him a sword. His father bought him the bow too, and Zamîn called him ''The Finarfin''. The Finarfin was using him very well, but he couldn't use him in any battles, cause he wasn't enough prepared. One goddamn night, Orcs, with no any reason, broke The Finarfin. He won't forget that, especially not forgive. 

 

 

Personality Traits: Shy, Brave, Little Bit Afraid

Ambitions: Be the best archer in the whole world, and be the archer for the Kingdom of Oren.

Strengths/Talents: Good archer, Quick

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Weak to rude words about his family, talking about The Finarfin, he cry when others do that

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): Height: 6'2 

Weight: 160 pounds

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here): http://imgur.com/femjZpH

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What this simply means is; your application is good! Do not fret, however, in order for this application to be accepted there are some minor details in your application that will need to be edited. Do not make a new app, simply use the 'Edit' button at the bottom of your application.

-The first section of your powergaming definition is incorrect.

-Please include more lore within your biography.

-The weaknesses need to be expanded upon.

 

If you want help of need me to review your app again once you have made the necessary changes. Please visit my profile and send me a Private Message simply asking me too.

 

 

You have 24 Hours to make the changes, failure to do so without providing good reason will result in a denial.

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Do not fear, this isn't the end. It just means that your application is not yet good enough to accept. Given you complete the points I have laid out, you should be accepted on your next attempt.

-You have failed to make the required edits within the 24 hour period.

 

You can re apply in 24 Hours from the time of this denial.

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