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Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: Jimmyfinn

How old are you?: 15

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: Reviving 'killed' players after PVP

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): No, I understand all of the rules fully

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? I was searching for RP minecraft servers on Youtube and I found someone highly recommended Lord of the Craft.  

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: taking on the the role of a made up character and acting as them in different situations.

What is metagaming?: Using information the player (me) knows, but the RP character (Baldor) does not yet. I.E. Where the  Forest is and if you are allowed to cut the trees down.

What is powergaming?: powergaming is where your RP character is over powered. So if they are able to take on four characters at once (1v4) they are too good and therefore powergaming.

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: Baldor

Character’s sex: Male

Character’s race: Dwarf

Character’s age: 728

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):

Baldor's soon to be parents and their parents lived in the mountains near Kal'Urgaun, there had been generation after generation living where they were now and that was going to stay that way, or so they thought. Baldor's future father had a strong, handsome father himself, and betting on his chances decided to enter into the first Grand Tournament in 1329, but was tragically killed by its victor, Kjell Ireheart. This greatly affected Baldor's father's feelings and drove him to train to be a warrior, to fight for his kingdom and deliver offspring who would follow in his footsteps. That was when he met Baldor's unsuspecting mother, once a farmers daughter, ran away to seek refuge in the mountains near Kal'Urgaun. 7 years down line in 1336 Orcs attack Kal'Urguan and Baldor's Father fights with the humans against the Orcs, stopping his new wife from joining him in battle for fear that he'd lose her. Baldor's father returned with honour after assisting the recapture of Humans and Dwarfs from an Orc camp, the celebrations lasted for months with warriors singing and telling tales of the battle.

However, 13 years after the Dwarfs and the Humans fought off the Orcs at Kal'Urguan the Undead attack and this time they had greater strength. The Undead destroyed Aegis and Baldor's father fled Aegis in 1351 with his family through the portal into the verge. From the verge Baldor's family travelled via ship to Asulon. At this stage Baldor's father was fully fit and strong, in the prime of his life, however he had one job, and that was to protect his family. For the next 700 or so years he ran the upkeep of his family, finally after all that time, he had a baby, Baldor was born. Months after his son's birth, he died in his sleep of old age at the age of 869, which is a amazing achievement in itself, but he'd finally done everything he wanted to do with his life. Baldor was a determined young boy, who, although never knew his father or grandfather, respected them fully and dedicated his training to them. As Baldor grew he worked in farms and down in the mines, all the while helping his greatly ageing mother to do general tasks as she was the only connection between Baldor and his father. Sadly, Baldor's mother passed away at the old age of 793 after falling down a flight of stairs. This left Baldor distraught but free to wander the lands, he leaves for Anthos, where he begins to set up a life for himself. But the year 1457 brought arounf the end to Anthos and all of Baldor's hard work, so he had to move on. So he left for the realm of Athera, where he helps re-capture Kal'Agnar, from the Orcs. The end of Athera was near however and in 1513 a giant worm destroys most of the realm, causing its inhabitants to flee to the Isles of Vailor. Baldor chose to seek refuge in the great kingdom of Urguan in that same year and has lived there ever since. 

 

Personality Traits: Determined, Honest, Loyal 

Ambitions: To protect everyone around him and to avenge his father

Strengths/Talents: Strong, Wields heavy weapons perfectly in battle 

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Slow moving, Not very intelligent ,  

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): 4ft 10inch with dark brown hair and he is 160lbs. He has dark grimy teeth and light blue eyes and is extremely muscular. He wears a fur coat covering his shoulders and back, with a gold belt holding up his hide trousers.

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here):

 

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Edited by Baldor
Baldor's age didn't match with the time line, now it does
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MQ0LD5V.pngThis application has changes that need to be made within the next 24 hours to be accepted; failure to do so will result in an automatic denial. Simply press the edit button near the bottom of the post in order to make the changes. If you have any questions, please message me! The problems include:

~The statement near the end of the biography includes 'Aegis to Asulon' which contradicts your character's age of 52. It has been long since that time so he would be much, much older. I'd suggest checking the Lotc wiki.

 

~The reference of an interaction between the grandfather and Kjell Ireheart is good! The statement regarding the father as a war hero is a little bit too much. This needs to be altered since this is too involved within real events that occurred when in actuality the father isn't in the server. I'd suggest maybe saying he returned him with honor that he assisted; nothing too noble or prestigious.

~The max height of a dwarf is usually 5 feet tall. This needs to be changed to fit lore.

~Lastly, the skin reference is rather too known and used as seen by a famous YouTuber referred to as Honeydew. Please try to find a skin that is not as commonly used.

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This application is accepted. On the behalf of the Application Team we welcome you to the server as a whitelisted player. Please wait as a GM will implement you to within 24-hours! While you are waiting your are more than welcomed to browse the forums and/or Wiki to refresh your mind on server events and lore.

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Moved to Accepted Applications Forum. Your application will be Implemented by a GM shortly.

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