[Denied] My whitelist application - slayerrosa

[Rosa 3]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: slayerrosa

How old are you?: 10 nearly 11

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?:  Destructive hacks such as kill aura, auto-mining, and free-cam, among other plugins granting an unfair advantage are not permitted. 

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): No

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? I heard about the server from a friend

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: Roleplaying is when you are in a story linked to your character

What is metagaming?: Metagaming is when you say use some knowledge your character actually don't know. like "Hey Abbys" when you don't even know what the person is called. (That was just a example)

What is powergaming?: If a guard arrests a thief and binds his hands and legs and the thief just say "The Thief uses his strength to break the bonds and runs away"

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: Rosa Brown

Character’s sex: Female

Character’s race: Human

Character’s age: 18

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):

Rosa was 5 years old when her mother teached her to bake and clean up. Rosa was very good at cleaning up. Five years later she learned to use a hoe. Rosa planted seeds and some months later she harvested them. Some years later they got out and fished but a stranger came and took their fishing rods when they didn't look. The theif stayed unknown and they have never seen the theif again. Rosa and her mother got out and bought some materials and other things in Felsen in the meantime Rosas father was at the inn in Haelun'or but on the return to home he got slayed by some bandits now Rosa only have her mother. Some years later Rosa and her mother visited The library of the Cloud Temple to read some books and learn something about farming because Rosa and her mother wasn't very good at it. They were just so good at farming so they could get bread nothing more. After some days at the library they traveled home. One day Rosa was out fishing and she couldn't find home. But Rosa had some navigation skills because her father were out with his friends and fishing on a boat with Rosa. But they couldn't see anything in the mist so Rosa found a compass and got them home safe. Now she didn't have a compass with her so she followed some strangers back to Felsen and then she could go the way from Felsen to her in Darkwood.

Personality Traits: Rosa is very friendly and she likes animals.

Ambitions: Rosa wanna be a farmer

Strengths/Talents: She is good to lie, she is very creative and healthy

Weaknesses/Inabilities: She is scared from dark places, she isnt strong

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): She is a very small person for her age. and she have green eyes and brown hair

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here):  

http://www.minecraftskins.com/skin/7301247/edit/

 

[Imi 425]

Under review.

[Imi 425]

Pending:
Your app has been put on pending for the following reasons....


-Your backstory is very cliche'd, meaning it's a common story. Try to make it something more original to give your character some interesting dynamics!

-Your skin is also very common. Try looking through planetminecraft to find a more original skin that suits the time period better.

-Your backstory does not include three pieces of server lore. I will link the wiki for you to look through!

You have 24 hours to make these changes. Change them by editing this post. If you have any help, feel free to contact me!

[tilly 5115]

Denied for failure to make requested changed within the allotted time.

[tilly 5115]

Moved to Denied Application Forum.