[Denied] My Second Application

[fire4456 0]

 

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Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?:Fire4456

How old are you?:19

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?:yup

What’s the rule you agree with the most?:no hacking

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules):no

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?a friend

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?:When you make a character and make a story out of it.

What is metagaming?:A specific method used in gaming witch has specific rules. 

What is powergaming?:It is a type of game you can interact with.

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name:Alyssa

Character’s sex:Girl

Character’s race:Human

Character’s age:20

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):Alyssa grew up in a tiny town and on her birthday when she turned 20, she discovered something was odd about her town. She thought there were dwarfs who lived there, and maybe witches. She went to school and thought everyone was odd. So she looked up her town and she wasn't the the only  one to think it was different. There were dwarfs and elf' lived there, she wasn't scared though. She lived by herself in a cottage. Always wondering who might be different.

Personality Traits:

Ambitions:To find out why her town is so different 

Strengths/Talents:She is strong, and has no fears

Weaknesses/Inabilities:She does not like spiders or snakes

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight):She is pretty skinny, blue eyes, tall, and pale

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here):http://www.minecraftskins.com/skin/7517972/grunge-girl/

 

 

[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

Denied.

 

-Your character's biography is still too short.

 

-All your definitions are incorrect.

 

-You failed to include any server lore in your character's biography. Seeming to just make up a random modern day character with no coherence or relation to the world Lord Of The Craft takes place in.

 

-Your minecraft skin is not suitable for the server.

 

-You need to expand upon your charcter's info, and balance their strengths and weaknesses.

 

-You failed to wait so much as 2 hours from your applications denial.

 

-Posting again before the wait time has transpired will result in being banned form applying for a duration of time.

 

-You may re-apply in 24 hours.

 

-Feel free to send me a PM if you have any questions.

[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

Moved to Denied Application Forum.