[Denied] white-list application

[villainary 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: villainary

How old are you?: 16

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: not breaking lore

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules):

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? My brother plays regularly and said that I would enjoy it

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: immersing yourself in your character and his/her world

What is metagaming?: using knowledge unknown to your character to benefit the character

What is powergaming?: making yourself overpowered to control a situation. E.g. I punched him and he exploded instantly

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: Wyrran

Character’s sex: male

Character’s race: high elf

Character’s age: 50 elven years

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):

Far away on the outskirts of an elven fortress, there lived a family of mages. They lived in peace until the mother gave birth to a child named Wyrran. As the child grew up both parents insisted he learnt magic. By the age of 20 it was obvious that he was unable to use magic. The mother began to hate the child for his inability to use magic, so behind the fathers back the mother started to learn soul puppetry to teach the child by stitching his soul with the arcane arts. She was unable to do so and left a scar down the child’s spine. The father found out and confronted the mother and ended up killing himself and the mother.

Later the councel decided that it was to dangerous to keep him near the settilment as he may be very powerful as the son of two powerful mages and black magic can create a monstrosity. so he was to be banished at the age of 50 so in the meantime he learn to fight with a sword in secret of the council until he was  50 when he took the next boat that left shore . He resented his own kind and vowed to kill any user of black magic in his quest to gain vengeance

Personality Traits: honourable, vengeful, organized and respectful

Ambitions: eradicate all black magic

Strengths/Talents: sword and stealth

Weaknesses/Inabilities: can only handle one on one fights and can’t deceive as it contradicts with his morals

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight):

Height= 6’1

Weight= 1.22 lb

Scar from base of the neck to lower back. The effects of black magic blooded his eyes.

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here): http://i.imgur.com/pFhMtOq.png?1

[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

Denied.

 

-You need to expand upon your meta-gaming definition, maybe us an example?

 

-50 elven years old would make your character 5,000 years old ingame, so hence they'd have lived through Aegis, The Verge, Asulon, Elysium, Kalos, Anthos, the Fringe, Thales, Athera, and now Vailor. I'd suggest just making him 50 years old, (not elven years), which'd have him just in Vailor.

 

-You failed to include any server lore aside from a mention of soul puppetry.

 

-You cannot have a character with any magical knowledge, quality, or ability whilst applying.

 

-High elves are known for having blue eyes, and very light hair.

 

-Your character being 1.22 pounds would quite literally make him unliving. I assume you were meaning 122 pounds. Please pay closer attention as you're writing your character's information.

 

-You may re-apply in 24 hours.

 

-Feel free to send me a PM if you have any questions.

[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

Moved to Denied Application Forum.