[Denied] [Application] TeKneek

[TeKneek 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: TeKneek

How old are you?: 15

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: Metagaming and powergaming are not allowed.

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): No

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: Friend (Rattedout456)

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: The acting of a particular character or role.

What is metagaming?: Using your out of character knowledge to use for your in character knowledge.

What is powergaming?: Too boost your character where he would have too much power and would not be roleplay.

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: Tehlmar

Character’s sex: Male

Character’s race: Dark Elf

Character’s age: 29

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.): Tehlmar was born in The Cloud Temple. At the age of 4, he killed his first wolf with a sword. 3 years after that, he was able to make clothing and craft bows. He and his mother went out for a water run, she needed it for washing Telhmar's clothes as he got blood on them. Out of nowhere, a mountain lion came into their lives. Tehlmar didn't know what to do, he's never seen a mountain lion and he didn't have his sword on him. He decided to run, grabbing his mother with him. The mountain lion was hot on their tail, his mother tripped and Tehlmar just kept running. He cried when he got home, knewing his mother was dead. But he had to move on and hunt for his own family.

Personality Traits: Usually likes to work in groups of his close friends, Feared, Intelligent, Athletic, Funny, Gets angry when something doesn't go right for him.

Ambitions: Wants to protect his family and try to find the mountain lion that killed his mother.

Strengths/Talents: Swordmanship, amazing hand-eye coordination, and good-looking.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Terrible with a bow, and not very social

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): 6'4" 160 lbs, violet eyes, white hair, blue skin 

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guidehere): http://prntscr.com/9u7pz0

[mitto 2312]

Under Review.

[mitto 2312]

Your Application has sadly been [DENIED]

 

Do not fear, this isn't the end. It just means that your application is not yet good enough to accept. Given you complete the points I have laid out, you should be accepted on your next attempt.

 

(1)

Your powergaming definition is incorrect, please correct it using the Definitions Guide found on this post:

Remember to write them out in your own words.

 

(2)

Please include more server lore into your biography. Just like Game of Thrones or Skyrim; Lord of the Craft has it own unique towns, cities, creatures etc. Please show you understand the general setting by including some in your biography.

https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Elves

https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Dark_Elves

https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Vailor

 

(3)

Dark elves usually have grey skin tones with red eyes and black or white hair. As shown here:

 

(4)

The events in your bio seem... unrealistic. For instance killing a wolf at age 4. Please make sure the things you say happened in your charaters biography are at least somewhat realistic, given the setting.

 

 

You can re apply in 12 Hours from the time of this denial.

 

 

[mitto 2312]

Moved to Denied Application Forum.