[Denied] Application

[Truthdetector 0]

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: Truthdetector

How old are you?:15

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: That you must above all things stay in character!

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules):

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? I was told by a friend while we were trying to find a RPG/roleplaying modpack. Then we found Lord of the craft wanting to invest in the roleplay community.

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: Roleplaying is when you act/preform a role in a society/community

What is metagaming?: A strategy used to go beyond the set limits of the server and set limits of skill

What is powergaming?: Not wanting to roleplay and storytell, rather going and pushing twords a goal

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name:Ryvel

Character’s sex:Male

Character’s race:High elf

Character’s age:21

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):

           Ryvel, son of Mordel and Gwen, who are alchemists.

They are upset that Ryvel became a ranger, but appreciate his uncanny ability to read his enemies energies.

They have a tense relationship within the family.
           Ryvel has become one of the protectors of the Undying Lands and their inhabitants.

He is betrothed to another Elf, Sarina, who is a fledgling Alchemist, a fact which brings Ryvel and his parents together.

This later will help them mend their relationship with his parents growing age and his wife.

Personality Traits: Calm and considerate

Ambitions: To protect the people and quest to stop evil

Strengths/Talents: Uncanny fast ability with the bow

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Handling swords and heavy armour

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): My character has blue piercing eyes, slim figure, blond hair, 70 inches tall, with pointed ears and light footedness

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guidehere): See my chosen skin below :D

 

[SpiltMemes 368]

• Your metagaming and powergaming definitions are both incorrect. Please provide the correct definitions of such. A link will be providede bellow that will help you in this. Remember to NOT plagairize and to keep it in your own words.
• Your biography is too short and lackluster, please lengthen it out and flesh your character out more. Maybe answer questions such as: Who were his parents? Where did he live? Where did he grow up? What was his living environment like?
• Your biography contains no server lore from LoTC. Lore can be found on the Wiki. A link bellow will be provided.
• This is NOT a Lord of The Rings server. Having this in mind there is no Undying Lands.

You may reapply in 24 hours.

[SpiltMemes 368]

Moved to Denied Application Forum.