[Denied] [Pending] Application

[Truthdetector 0]

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: Truthdetector

How old are you?:15

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: That you must above all things stay in character!

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules):

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? I was told by a friend while we were trying to find a RPG/roleplaying modpack. Then we found Lord of the craft wanting to invest in the roleplay community.

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: Roleplaying is when you act/preform a role in a society/community

What is metagaming?: When you the player uses outside information to give them an advantage in the game. Knowledge of mathmatics and other crafts.

What is powergaming?: When a player excludes the other catagories of the game(roleplay,bourd games ect...)  focusing on one branch of the game striving to only be more powerful.

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name:Ryvel

Character’s sex:Male

Character’s race:High elf

Character’s age:21

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):

           Ryvel, son of Mordel and Gwen, who are spell-crafters.

They are upset that Ryvel became proficient in the bow rather then in magic, but appreciate his uncanny ability to read his enemies energies.

They have a tense relationship within the family and the people who are friends.

The childhood of Ryvel was ruff within the famly always trying to sneak out of lessons to go hunting with friends or mingle with the non-spellcaster underclass.
           Ryvel has become one of the protectors of the non-magical class and their people.

He is betrothed to another Elf, Sarina, who is a fledgling magic-caster, a fact which brings Ryvel and his parents together.

This later will help them mend their relationship with his parents growing age and his wife.

Ryvels parents die and Ryvel and his wife plead with the Monks to try to save them but there was no hope.

This trdigiy throws Ryvel into a state of depression devorcing his wife and going to live as a mercinary.

After becoming a mercinary Ryvel secures himself a powerful bow and a slayer steel sword which he still needs to learn how to use. The adventure begins now in the present day with his sword and bow trying to find his way to a better and non-depressed life.

Personality Traits: Calm and considerate

Ambitions: To protect the people and quest to stop evil

Strengths/Talents: Uncanny fast ability with the bow, inteligence in crafting

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Handling swords and heavy armour,metal handling and magic

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): My character has blue piercing eyes, slim figure, blond hair, 70 inches tall, with pointed ears and light footedness

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guidehere): See my chosen skin below :D

 

 

[Lego XBOX 915]

Greetings applicant, after reviewing your application I have placed it on Pending for reason(s) pointed out below. You have twenty four (24) hours to make these changes, message me if you have any questions or concerns. Failing to fulfill the requested changes will result in this application being denied. By being denied you will have to wait 12 hours before re-applying with the proper changes in place.

 

Your definition of Powergaming is incorrect, please refer to http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Roleplaying for guidance.

 

Please include Server Lore into your application. Your racial Sub-Wiki for elves can be found on the Wiki ( http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Elves )! It will help you get started in incorporating Server Lore into your Biography such as certain places, wars or even significant events.

 

If you have any questions or concerns feel free to send me a PM! As a reminder you have 24 hours to respond to me in a PM and fix your application based off the information and request given above. If you do not Private Message me I will review it on my own time around the time of 24 hours from this post. In addition to what was stated above I reserve the right to add or remove requested edits needed for the application. Good luck applicant!

 

 

[Lego XBOX 915]

You have been denied for reason(s) pointed out below, message me if you have any questions or concerns. You may re-apply after 12 hours have passed.

 

Applicant failed to make all requested edits to the application within the given 24 hour period.

 

If you have any questions or concerns feel free to send me a PM! I will be more than willing to help point you in the correct direction and I highly recommend taking into consideration the advice and issue(s) with your application that I have stated above.

[Lego XBOX 915]

Moved to Denied Application Forum.