[Denied] White List Aplication

[viverrinesquid1 0]

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?:Viverrinesquid1

How old are you?:14

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?:yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?:metagaming

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): Hostile, toxic or satirical memeage

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?i spent 3 days searching for a nice RP server

 

Character’s name:

Character’s sex:Male

Character’s race:Human

Character’s age:23

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):Alex is a normal young man that tries to help people in anything they need, but will not stand for betrayal, and will not allow innocent people to get hurt, so he will get his revenge on anyone who comits a crime and is determined to save even the poorest people from the woods, to the villages. But after finding out that there are too many problems to handle, so he tries to recruit people into his outlaw gang.

   Every day him and his ally's would go through forests, entire oceans, and deserts, in order to save inocent people. though when he finally brings peace to the empire, he will take the life of a normal person and help people that need an extra hand once the world is no longer corrupt.

Personality Traits:Very protective, brave, completes whats needed, honest, stealthy, will do anything nessesary to complete a quest, very optimistic, high hopes.

Ambitions:helping

Strengths/Talents: allies

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Rain/Storms

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight):7 feet, 4 inches; 160 lb

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here):

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This application has been denied for the following reasons:

 

• You have failed to include the definition section. Please add this and fill it in with your roleplaying, metagaming and powergaming definitions.

 

• You haven't stated what your character's name is. Please do so.

 

• Your biography contains little to no backstory. Please add this in such as where your character was born, what he did when he was younger etc

 

• Your biography contains no server lore. Please add some in. Look at the link below for help with this.

https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Vailor

 

• Your ambition is rather vague. Please expand upon it. Helping what, helping who?

 

• Please add some more strengths that are character specific. Allies would be a strength to everybody.

 

• Please add some more weaknesses.

 

• 7 feet, 4 inches is too tall for a human. They stand from the heights of 4 feet to 6 feet, 6 inches. If you need help with your character's appearance, look at the link below.

https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Humans

 

• Your skin is not suitable for the server. It appears to be an Assassin's Creed skin. Please get another one that depicts how your character looks.

 

You may re-apply in 24 hours.

 

If you have any questions or concerns, feel free to PM me or another AT member.

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