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((This is still a WIP, so it may change in the future, but for now this is the basics. Also I am foolish to post this and then ask, but please do not meta, this is simply for a good read.))

Vladmir shivers as he writes quickly, the bite was surely to take over any second. He quickly pulls a bottle of sheep blood and begins drinking, careful not to spill it on the parchment.

Diary entry of Lord Vladmir

I am writing this with haste, the bite is sure to take me over, I am already feeling the urges. It all began on a cold night, and with a even colder rumor, that chilled me to the bones.

Me and a couple of my close friends were just getting ready to leave our local tavern, we all had work to do and were going to head back to our manors to do. As the rain beat down on the roof, two scruff looking men barged through the doors laughing. They looked like they had just came from a war, and were speaking of strange occurrences, that I thought to be rumors. Just as I hit the door I heard a glimpse of their conversation, "And as he spoke he cleverly leaned in for a kiss on her cheek, but instead of kissing the cheek, he bit her, right on the neck!" They said laughing it off. This one simple rumor would be my downfall.

Vladmir shakes and begins scratching his body, he knew he would have to feed soon, the sheep's blood would not quell the hunger.

I went home that night and all I could think about were the strange words the men talked about. For the next few days I had completely ignored my work, only focusing on finding any explanation to this rumor. What I had found was vague, but through several highly valued pieces of art it truly showed what it was. It had seemed that it was a sickness, a illness if you will. It affected the central nervous system making the body hunger for... blood... not animal blood. Though most reasonable scholars simply said it was dementia, mind over matter if you will, they said that there was no such thing, that it was all a mind game that your brain played with you, and that your body believed. I believed this foolish theory as well, until HE showed up.

Vladmir nods his head, trying his damnest to remember, but the urge was so great. After several minutes of thinking the memories came flooding back.

It was the dead of night, my little hunt for the truth had now become my obsession. I had spoken to several scholars all of which dismissed the claims I made. This little rumor... it was driving me insane. I guess there was one good thing HE brought me, and that was relief that I wasn't insane. The wind began howling and I closed my window, lit a candle and began writing what I had found. In the past week several humans, mostly female, had gone missing, only to be found again dead. My boards began to creak and I listened closely, it was not my old house, it was a invader. I grabbed my iron sword and opened my door, there was no one, but the air was cold as death.

Vladmir cries a bit, but his cries become small chuckles, he licks his lips.

As I turned around HE was there, the man who confirmed my fears. He smiled at me from his dark black robes and under his snug hood. I was paralyzed, I couldn't move, his stare was so.... enchanting. He chuckled a bit before sinking two sharp points into my neck. As I began to fall unconscious HE removed his hood. HE was me, I still do not understand it, but it happened, it must have been magic.

Vladmir begins to fall unconscious from the sheer amount of mental damage that has been caused, but before he does, he writes a few last words.

My obsession was now my reality

Vladmir falls unconscious, he would awake several weeks later as a new man, a creature of the night with a thirst for blood.

Vladmir after the bite

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((OOC))

Yehay! Vampires! ;)

I like it

((lol Thanks mate, although my idea of making them a race was already brought up before I brought it up and was declined, I still have a interest do to something, possibly a "family" of sorts. I will do something, i am just planning right now though. As for you ninja, that would be cool, maybe we will meet on the road... at night time.... when I am hungry... who knows anything could happen XD))

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(( Really? Gah why do you have vampire stuff when its not in the lore! *facepalms*. The reason why the lore was declined was because having vampires , undead , acsended, talking kitty kats (which are great addition) would be to much. In my opinion i would have asked a gm like native or availer or someone to post this or fm mod. Sorry for the trolling i like how you write it, but you know, what i just said brings up a valid point. As i said i do like the writing. ))

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(( Really? Gah why do you have vampire stuff when its not in the lore! *facepalms*. The reason why the lore was declined was because having vampires , undead , acsended, talking kitty kats (which are great addition) would be to much. In my opinion i would have asked a gm like native or availer or someone to post this or fm mod. Sorry for the trolling i like how you write it, but you know, what i just said brings up a valid point. As i said i do like the writing. ))

((lol first what you said made NO sense. I have brought it up and was told vampire stuff was declined, if you ACTUALLY read my story you would know that this was in fact just a mental condition taken to incredible heights. I didn't think I would have to explain, but you had to bring up the lore so I will. Vladmir had heard a rumor, and he started investigating. His little investigation became a obsession causing dementia, and making him paranoid. then after a month of studying it, it was embedded into his head it was real, so what he saw when he turned around was a mental projection cast by his own imagination. Mind over matter. And because he believes in it so much, his body literally has a need for blood. This is all a mental condition caused by, fear, dementia, and more. Before you post something next time please read it correctly I am not adding on the lore this is MY character.))

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((lol first what you said made NO sense. I have brought it up and was told vampire stuff was declined, if you ACTUALLY read my story you would know that this was in fact just a mental condition taken to incredible heights. I didn't think I would have to explain, but you had to bring up the lore so I will. Vladmir had heard a rumor, and he started investigating. His little investigation became a obsession causing dementia, and making him paranoid. then after a month of studying it, it was embedded into his head it was real, so what he saw when he turned around was a mental projection cast by his own imagination. Mind over matter. And because he believes in it so much, his body literally has a need for blood. This is all a mental condition caused by, fear, dementia, and more. Before you post something next time please read it correctly I am not adding on the lore this is MY character.))

((And a clear sign that it is mind over matter is when I directly stated " HE was ME" he saw himself bite himself, it made no sense to him and the only thing his brain could think of was that it was a vampire who bit him. But in fact it was a mental projection cast by his overrun imagination, when he was "bit" his brain and body believed it so much that he in fact now has a need for blood, skin has turned more pale because his body believes it doesn't have a lot of blood in it, and more. Again please read before posting, this is a mental disease sure, but it is so real that over a course of centuries he could literally develop a new species that has evolved from what was once humans, into beings that needed blood on occasional events to live. This is or could be the start of something big.))

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Just throwing this out there, but "Vampires" are a fantasy being derived from the medical conditions Porphyria and Hypoalbuminemia. So yes, his character could have all the physical indicators of being a Vampire - sensitivity to sunlight, pale skin, as well as psychologically "thinking" he was a Vampire.

He can't turn into a bat though, i'm afraid ;)

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Just throwing this out there, but "Vampires" are a fantasy being derived from the medical conditions Porphyria and Hypoalbuminemia. So yes, his character could have all the physical indicators of being a Vampire - sensitivity to sunlight, pale skin, as well as psychologically "thinking" he was a Vampire.

He can't turn into a bat though, i'm afraid ;)

(( And that is fine Freya XD, but to my character this is extremely real. After I get sorted and what not I will be making a "family" of sorts made up of dedicated and great role players, and if I find any willing participants than they will be voluntarily turned into a "vampire" of course this brings about changes that are major, and will also come with a pledge to yours truly. I will make a topic in a bit discussing it more in more details.))

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Pledge to Lord Vladmir

I pledge allegiance

To thy Lord

I give my life

To thy lord

What is mine

Is thy Lord's

What is yours

Is thy Lord's

Thy Lord's word is law

Thy lord is to be appeased

Thy Lord Vladmir, I pledge allegiance to thee.

Also check out my new family I am setting up, hope fully it doesn't fail =/

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/14985-the-von-untergang-family/

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(( I did read and im sorry. Atleast i complimented on how nice your story was :P. But i did not know of the mental sickness thing. I did not read that one maybe post al ink for those who dont get it like me? So yes i am sorry. Forgives? ))

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(( I did read and im sorry. Atleast i complimented on how nice your story was :P. But i did not know of the mental sickness thing. I did not read that one maybe post al ink for those who dont get it like me? So yes i am sorry. Forgives? ))

((Say my pledge and I will think about it XD.))

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Moved to the Great Library. It shall be sorted into appropriate category shortly.

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