[✗] Whitelist/character applications

[CreeperWarlord13 0]

whitelist application

What’s your Minecraft account name?: CreeperWarlord12
How old are you?: 13
What timezone are you in?:(UTC+ 10:00) Brisbane QLD Australia
Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): yes
Have you read and agreed to the rules?: yes
What’s the rule you agree with the most?: not power gaming
Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!): no
How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: a friend named Outlaw_jimmy
Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable):
Have you logged into the server yet? (You cannot be whitelisted without logging in at least once): yes i have

 

in Character Information

Character’s name: Jordyn
Character’s sex: male
Character’s race: wood elf
Character’s age: 18
Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add three references to the server lore.):Jordyn came from a wood elf town in the forests of savoy, he was raised to be a knight of his town one day, but as fate would have it, he would not become a knight due to his age and the fact that the openings for a knight in training to be accepted were closed for now since they did not need anyone at the time, his family were being careful as the recent victory at Hiebenhold 2.0 and The Kingdom of Urguan and the Konigsreich of Vandoria joining forces and form the Empire of Vanderguan not to mention The Empire of Vanderguan splinters and collapses after mere months,once Jordyn was 18 he decided he should venture off and go to oren seeing as it seemed like a place where interesting things happened and to start a new life there.
Personality Traits: happy most of the time
Ambitions: to become a famous miner 
Strengths/Talents: swordsmanship and archery
Weaknesses/Inabilities: easily distracted 
Appearance: tall and fairly strong
Skin:

[garentoft 9265]

 

Hey, applicant;

Your application has been denied.

 

• Your definitions of roleplaying, metagaming and powergaming are missing. Please include these next time as it’s very important that you can define those. Here’s a thread you can use for help with the definitions and examples, but remember not to copy it! Also here’s a link to the format.

• Your biography is very short. We expect two lengthy paragraphs about your character’s history, what events they’ve witnessed and just simply what they’ve done in their past. Even though you have the required amounts of lore, it’s always nice to have more, so here’s a link to the wiki.

• Your personality traits are only, well, one personality trait, is that really all there is to your character? Please add more personality traits, such as being brave, greedy or even using hands to put emphasis on his words.

• You don’t have a lot of strengths/weaknesses, and it’s very unbalanced, being a good archer and swordsman but only being easily distracted? Please balance this and add more strengths/weaknesses, as they tell us a lot about your character and what they can and can’t do.

 

You may re-apply in 24 hours.

If you have any questions send me a PM via the forums.

[garentoft 9265]

This application has been denied.

 

Moved to the Denied Applications forum.