Application for Balthamos

[Balthamos 0]

Minecraft account name: Dom2772

Age: 16

Time zone/Country: London, UK

Good language/Grammar: Yes, it is my first language.

Description: Hello, my name is Dom and im currently a full time student hoping to go into law. I've always loved roleplaying and minecraft, this seems like a great way to fuse the two.

Time on server: Usually an hour or so a night and longer on weekends.

How long have you played minecraft: I've been playing since just before it went into beta.

RP experience: I've been RPing for a few years now, i've played dungeons and dragons a lot and was in a roleplaying guild in WoW (in the first 3 months before it got awful)

Expectations: I expect this to be a big ol' server to explore with lots of lore to get immersed

in.

Other servers: I've been just building and doing general minecraft stuff on a friends server since i got the game, this would be my first actual RP server.

Rules: Yes, I have read and understood all the rules.

Races: Human, Elf, Dwarf, Orc.

How did i hear about you: Suggestion box on Youtube.

Vote: Yes.

Favourite law: No leet speak. One of the main reasons I stopped playing traditional MMO's.

Least favourite law: Imprisonment; i'm not sure how it's implemented, but then again I don't plan on ever having to encounter it.

Lord of Craft account name: My Screen name is Balthamos.

In Character.

Name: Balthamos

Race: Human

Forum Name: Balthamos

Biography: Balthamos is a schemer, always has been, always will be. While originally of noble birth he was disowned for his affiliation with the less reputable types the city had to offer. Now he wants power to right that wrong, and he will let none stand in his way.

Age: 20

Appearance: Around 5"9 with proud aquiline features but a face in an almost permanent sneer.

Personality: Very erudite and discerning, all the better to find those easy to manipulate. Suspicious, almost paranoid towards new aquaintances, but trusting and generous to those he feels he can trust.

Ambitions: To have a seat on the kings council, and prove his family wrong.

Read/Write: Both, skills he learned from his childhood at noble courts.

Builder: Avoids grunt work whenever he can, but will do almost anything if it helps further his plans.

Swordsman: Limited swordsmanship, his education in sparring barely half over before he was banished.

Farming: Cares little for the second oldest proffesion.

Special skills: Very good with numbers and organisation.

Skin: http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/3/20110918010826.png/

[Balthamos 0]

Skin: http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/3/20110918010826.png/

[TheRedNinja 30]

Common reasons people are denied:

-It has bad grammar or Punctuation.

-Your biography was too short.

-Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.

-You obviously didn't read the lore.

-Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.

-It lacked effort.

-Your skin isn't RP.

-Needed an actual picture of your skin.

-You didn't include a skin link.

-Your application was too short.

These are just some of the reasons it could have been

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