StrifeOr's Revised Revised App

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Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name: StrifeOr

-How old are you?: 15

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence: U.S. Central Time

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: Yes, I do.

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I love MineCraft, and like looking for servers to play on. I own semi-successful clan and enjoy hanging out with friends and joking

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?: 8+ hours, if I can do my homework

-How long have you played minecraft?: 7 months

-What do you know about roleplaying? How long have you been doing it? What kind?:Roleplaying is basically acting, you pretend you are a character, you have a personality, you have a backstory, you have a guildeline to follow, and you must keep in character to convince others you are what your character is. I have only been RPing for a few months, but I would love to broaden my RPing Knowledge, and I have been doing medieval roleplay

-What do you expect this server will be like?: Very involved,a great experience for a budding RPer

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: I play on Aggression and still play on it

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules? What about the lore?:

-Name the 4 races on this server. Orc, Dwarf, Human, Elf

-How did you hear about us?: Friend in a clan

-Did you vote?: Yes

-What was your favourite Law?: No racism/RP Racism

-What was your least favourite Law?:

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name? Strife

In-Character:

-Character Name: Strife Talados

-What is your Race?: Human

-Lordofthecraft.net/forum  forum account: Strife

-Biography: A loner from a high-class militaristic family in the town of Tenzath. His early life was him sitting alone by himself,watching his classmates. Then one day, a madman came to the school he attended, killed every other child and then killed him. He was a lucky one to survive. He vowed to be able to stop the people, and when he turned 10, asked his father to join the Denenrius Military School. He became extremely good with a sword and beat his classmates everytime they sparred.

He went to the school for 7 years, working his ranks up the military of his now medium sized town and wanted to join the official militia. He went to his dad's study,but he wasn't there> Strife stepped on a scroll that had plans for an Orc attack on Tenzath, and then his father walked in and saw him with the scroll. He grabbed his father steel sword from the rack and ran. His father then killed his mother and siblings, then yelled an incantation towards his direction.

He tried to call the local military he was in, the Zanbon, to tell them about his plot. They didn't believe him, so he went AWOL from the military and wandered, trying to learn the skills that would help him live. He almost died walking around, until a group of elves saved him from death. He learned their craft, trained with them, and learned skills that he didn;t know, and got accustomed to resource gathering. He then payed back his debt to the elves after a month, and set off again. He then located his village, razed to the ground. His new goal, other than survive, was to kill his father, and is trying to track him to this day.... Until his father's curse caught up with him, and his soul was ripped from his body.

-Character Age: 18

-Character Appearance: Blonde hair, blue eyes, blue robe with silver trim

-Character Personality: jack-of-all-trades, somewhat of a loner, educated, persuasive.

-Your ambitions: Master every craft there is, kill his father for his crimes

-Can your character read or write?: yes

-Can your character mine?: I am decent at collecting ores.

-Are you a capable builder? I would say so.

-Can you wield a sword?: He is a master with it against enemy monsters.

-Enjoy Farming?: no, I get others to do it

-Does your character have any special skills?:] Was trained by his father to fight the hordes of monsters off

-A screenshot of your skin:

-Other Information: Whenever he get's drunk, he starts to sing

[Alana (Previously Latsi) 136]

Denied, please fix the following:

1) Go more in-depth on your biography.

2) Expand on your answers.