thomas5705 app 4

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Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name: thomas5705

-How old are you?: 14

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence: GMT United Kingdom

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: Yes, I have been in education since I was four.

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I am a fourteen year old gamer who enjoys play on both Xbox and Pc. I have come to this server because Minecraft isnt that enjoyable anymore and i think this server can get me playing again.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?: I could be on the server at least one hour a day but this will extend as i play the server more.

-How long have you played Minecraft?: I have been playing Minecraft since Alpha, i do not know the exact date.

-What do you know about Roleplaying? What is it?: Roleplaying is a bit like acting, your pretending to be someone your not, you fill in a role and along the way you are writing a storey. Your story revolves around your character and will link together with other characters as you meet them.

-What do you expect this server will be like?: I expect this server to be a great place to make new friends with such a great community and a good place to become better at roleplaying.

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: The main server i used to play on was AshesHQ, i stopped playing because it was getting to much to handle, people were always annoying me and i didnt really get to play the game, i was annoyed because I was the mayor of the first village on the server, twenty people lived there.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: I have read the rules and I understand all of the rules except the one about the environment, are you allowed to cut down tree's and mine without it being griefing? I also agree to the rules.

-Name the 4 races on this server: The four races on this server are Human, Orc, Elf and Dwarf

-How did you hear about us?: I heard about this server on Youtube, Reckreations made a video about this server and linked it in the video description.

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?: thomas5705

In-Character:

-Character Name: Bill

-What is your Race?: Human

-Biography: Bill is a farmer who has had to fend for himself ever since he was five...

Bill was born in the Cloud Temple of Aegis, just like everyone else. But there was something different about Bill.

He had no parents so he lived with the monks, there he would learn the ways of God and about peace. But when he turned five he ran away from the monks during the night. He didnt believe in God, even though he knew he existed otherwise he would not of been born he still tried to block it all out. While running he had flashbacks, flashbacks of how happy he was with the monks, but all that happyness stopped when he had the dream...

He ran and ran and ran. Until he came to a kingdom, the kingdom of Oren. Bill fit in here as it was a Human kingdom. He slept on the streets, often he was taken by the guards to a near by orphanage. But every time he was taken there he would escape again.

To live he worked for a man, he was paid to look after his crops when he went on 'business trips.'

He worked here until he was seventeen, now he goes to start his own farm to cover up his secrets.

-Character Age: 17

-Character Appearance: Bill is an average sized, brown hair, green eyes man who wears a blue tunic.

-Character Personality: Bill is very friendly and easy to talk to, he tends not to argue unless he has a good enough reason.

-Your ambitions: Bill's ambition is to start a farm and discover his true religion.

-Can your character read or write?: Yes, he recieved private education.

-Can your character mine?: No, but he would like to learn.

-Are you a capable builder?: Bill can construct wooden buildings.

-Can you wield a sword?: Bill can wield low grade swords for he is not that strong (Wooden and stone).

-Enjoy Farming?: Yes.

-Does your character have any special skills?: He is a very skilled farmer.

-A screenshot of your skin:

My Skin

-Other Information:

[Whitebeard 126]

Common reasons people are denied:

-It has bad grammar or Punctuation.

-Your biography was too short.

-Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.

-You obviously didn't read the lore.

-Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.

-It lacked effort.

-Your skin isn't RP.

-Needed an actual picture of your skin.

-You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work.

-Your application was too short.

These are just some of the reasons it could have been

I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application.

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/1035-read-first-chevaliers-guide-to-posting-a-good-application/

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Common reasons people are denied:

-It has bad grammar or Punctuation.

-Your biography was too short.

-Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.

-You obviously didn't read the lore.

-Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.

-It lacked effort.

-Your skin isn't RP.

-Needed an actual picture of your skin.

-You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work.

-Your application was too short.

These are just some of the reasons it could have been

I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application.

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/1035-read-first-chevaliers-guide-to-posting-a-good-application/

What did i do wrong? I got declined for my bio being to short and its now extended?