Yesera´s Application (Retry)

[Yesera 0]

Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name:

Yesera

-How old are you?:

14 years old

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence:

Netherlands GMT +1

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:

I'm not good in English yet, but i'm still learning it.

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:

I'm going to secundairy school. I spend most of the time in video games, mostly RPG's and Minecraft.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?:

Around 5-10 hours. Depends on my homework mostly.

-How long have you played minecraft?:

Since the BETA.

-What do you know about roleplaying? How long have you been doing it? What kind?:

A roleplaying game is a game in which players assume the roles of characters in a fictional setting. I play RPG's since i was about 7 years old, i started with World of Warcraft, i'm still playing it.

-What do you expect this server will be like?:

I hope there will be many PvP around and a great experience.

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:

I play on a server hosted by a friend of a friend, i still play on it, it isn't a roleplaying server just a server playing Minecraft the standard way.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules? What about the lore?:

I have read, understood the rules, and i agree with them. I've read the lore.

-Name the 4 races on this server.

Human, Elves, Orcs, Dwarfs ( i've heard about Undeads )

-How did you hear about us?:

It's a very popular server, and i love RPG's so i want to give it a try.

-Did you vote?:

A couple times.

-What was your favourite Law?:

No Racism.

-What was your least favourite Law?:

I've to follow the Kindom's Law, but i have to it's a Law.

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?

Yesera

In-Character:

-Character Name:

Yesera

-What is your Race?:

Human

-Lordofthecraft.net/forum forum account:

LotC : 'Yesera' Curse: 'Azagro'

-Biography:

The father of Yesera called Lanus Greatshield is a very powerfull man, but he turned against the will of the King, so Yesera's familiy had to flee from The Great Kingdom of Oren to a friend called Komrin Blacksword, but there was no space in his village so Komrin was going to build a house for Yesera's family, but that took some time, so Yesera's family had to sleep near the village until there house was ready. The first night Lanus heard something but he thought it was nothing after he thought that 5 Orc's came out of the brushes and stabed Lanus in the back. Yesera's mother called Leona was trying to hold them away from Lanus, but she couldn't hold it much longer and got killed. The 5 Orc's left Lanus suffer, Yesera was sleeping in a blue cloth and woke up. He looked his father for the last time in his eyes, then he died. 1 Hour later a Orc called Nirin came near the village and he heard a awfull noise, he head to the noise, it was Yesera crying. He toke the human baby to his village. When Yesera was older he let him work all day he let him practise for the Battleground against the humans. When Nirin tested Yesera's skill he was shocked, so many strengt, skills and good moves, Nirin thought about a entertaining arena for money so he set one up. Yesera battled and battled. Nirin know that Yesera was ready for a battle marathon. Nirin set up 13 battles after each other after the 11th one Yesera started to getting very very tired, the counselor of Nirin told him to forfeit but Nirin wouldn't listen. So the 13th fight Yesera was almost wrecked and yes a big sword went trough his shoulder. Nirin was very angry he beats and kicked on Yesera's shoulder. Now Yesera had enough he escaped from Nirin's village and searched for any other humans he found a little village of warriors. The leader was blind, Yesera told the story about his life and one of the elite fighter interupted him and said Yesera had the eyes of Lanus Greatshield, and asked if he rememberd something from his baby time, Yesera showed the blue cloth he was bounded in, the elite fighter shocked that was the cloth of Lansus Greatshield he suggested to go to Komrin Blacksword to help him to being a human again.

-Character Age:

20 years old

-Character Appearance:

-Brown hair

-Brown eyes

-Wearing a metal gear

-Sword on his back

-Character Personality:

-A calm but vicious warrior.

-A man who accept the truth

-Very polite to other people, even the enemy

-Your ambitions:

Becoming the most feared warrior in the Kingdom.

-Can your character read or write?:

I can read, but the Orcs dind't have books.

-Can your character mine?:

The Orc forced my to mine, they saw me as the dirty one.

-Are you a capable builder?

Yes, i had to build houses for the Orcs

-Can you wield a sword?:

I even can wield two weapons.

-Enjoy Farming?:

No, the Orcs ate raw flesh.

-Does your character have any special skills?:]

Can fight with every weapon

-A screenshot of your skin:

http://minecraftskins.com/preview/both/9/227626

-Other Information:

Excuse me for my grammar mistakes. The people in my bio are not real i hope it doesn't matter.

[Whitebeard 126]

Common reasons people are denied:

-It has bad grammar or Punctuation.

-Your biography was too short.

-Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.

-You obviously didn't read the lore.

-Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.

-It lacked effort.

-Your skin isn't RP.

-Needed an actual picture of your skin.

-You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work.

-Your application was too short.

These are just some of the reasons it could have been

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