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Original lore:

 

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A Blemished Body


Whilst aesthetically demonic, devils remain functionally identical to their genetic race; those bearing Ixris’ curse are not truly infernal beings. They do not possess any of the boons or banes of inferi. 

 

Their internal physiology remaining unchanged, devils can and should be categorised as normal descendants, differing only in their mutated exteriors as a consequence of malefic meddling. 

 

When created through magical tampering, usually naztherak, their skin is forever marked in the colour of their maker’s malflame. Atop this, the cursed lineages of devils are also subject to a variety of unsightly mutations. All devils inherit no less than three of these visible afflictions.

 

Devlish mutations are as follows:

-forked tongues
-slitted, goatlike, small, large, or entirely absent pupils 
-coloured or translucent eyeballs
-serpentine tails 
-scaly, snake-like skin which sheds periodically
-translucent skin
-hair and nails which bleed when cut, alopecia, a lack nails of nails or nails which grow black and pointed
-webbed digits
-horns of keratin protruding from the head. It is possible for them to connect in the middle, resembling a halo
-keratin spikes which jut from the collarbones, shoulders, elbows or knees (or all of the above)
-feathers jutting from anywhere on the body
-goat, bat, snake or pig-like facial structures and nasal shapes
-cloven hooves of keratin in place of feet
-pointed, fang-like canines


New lore (Changes in Bold)

Spoiler

A Blemished Body


Whilst aesthetically demonic, devils remain functionally identical to their genetic race; those bearing Ixris’ curse are not truly infernal beings. They do not possess any of the boons or banes of inferi. 

 

Their internal physiology remaining unchanged, devils can and should be categorised as normal descendants, differing only in their mutated exteriors as a consequence of malefic meddling. 

 

When created through magical tampering, usually naztherak, their skin is forever marked in the colour of their maker’s malflame. Atop this, the cursed lineages of devils are also subject to a variety of unsightly mutations. Atop this, the cursed lineages of devils are also subject to a variety of unsightly mutations. All devils inherit no less than three of these visible afflictions.

 

Devlish mutations are as follows:

-forked tongues
-slitted, goatlike, small, large, or entirely absent pupils 
-coloured or translucent eyeballs
-serpentine, demonic, felinid, corvid, or caprine tails
-scaly, snake-like skin which sheds periodically
-translucent skin
-hair and nails which bleed when cut, alopecia, a lack nails of nails or nails which grow black and pointed
-webbed digits
-horns of keratin protruding from the head. It is possible for them to connect in the middle, resembling a halo
-keratin spikes which jut from the collarbones, shoulders, elbows or knees (or all of the above)
-feathers or fur jutting from anywhere on the body
-goat, bat, snake, crow, or feline-like facial structures and nasal shapes
-cloven hooves of keratin in place of feet
-pointed, fang-like canines


I liked the rewrite's idea that you could make a being that very much fits in with any of the pentacle. So, I asked navi and decided to make it a brief amendment. I also liked the idea that if you had a new devilish mutation you thought of, you could use that too for character design bonus points.

 

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Giving cc the option to become cat boys is a dangerous yet bold one

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6 minutes ago, Cheese said:

Giving cc the option to become cat boys is a dangerous yet bold one

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Amendments/Additions implemented into main lore post. Thank you for your submission. Moving to correct subforum to prevent redundancy and clutter.

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