lucaiskook's app 2

[lucaiskook 0]

-Minecraft Account Name: lucaiskook

-How old are you?: 16

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence: i duno but i live in Swizerland

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: i am american but i like to use (u)you ®are and stuf like that

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: i help with computer Mac tec stuf. I play minecraft 6-8 hours a day

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?: i can play about 10-20 hours

-How long have you played minecraft?: I have been playing Minecraft since 1.6

-What do you know about roleplaying?: i know that its like you play a character and you make your lines as you go along but still stay in character

-What do you expect this server will be like?: an epic server i saw the vid and knew i hade to join

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: i play on 1 other server and i have not left it but this one looks totaly more epic

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: yes i have and i respect them all

-Name the 4 races on this server: Elves, Orcs, Humans, Dwarves.not including the subraces, Undead and Ascended.

-How did you hear about us?: lol i was waching a minecraft vid and i saw this ip in the persons ip list but it is epic

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?: lucaiskook

In-Character:

-Character Name: lucaiskook

-What is your Race?: Orc (the best class there is)

-Biography: I grew up in Woodstock,CT spent 11 yeasr there and now live in swisserland

-Character Age: 26 a strong Orc that will fight for his Honor

-Character Appearance: Wearing tattered cloths with blood stains and rips in it fighting all who dont listen

-Character Personality: Mean, fierce, and strong he is nice to woman. But not nice to men who think little of him

-Your ambitions: to avenge his father

-Can your character read or write?: He can read and write barly

-Can your character mine?: Yes

-Are you a capable builder?: not to well

-Can you wield a sword?: He sees him self as the best Sword fighter there is.

-Enjoy Farming?: He Farms for food and sells it for money

-Does your character have any special skills?: he has red eyes that stun prey

-A screenshot of your skin: http://www.minershoes.com/skin/view/i4e ... 5471347168

-Other Information: I hope i get accepted i love the Vid But i dont have a skin :( and i have a Mac so i cant make one.....what do i do...

[Lirinya 4036]

Denied.

You need to put more effort and detail in it.

The biography should be about your character not you. Generally everything needs more detail.

Please look through your app and repost as a new thread in a few days time.