Sindias Application #1

[sindia 0]

Out-Of-Character:Emily May

Minecraft Account Name:Jaffacakes1432

Did you attend minecon and sign up at the LOTC booth?:no

How old are you?:11

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:]GMT

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:yes

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:I love playing on minecraft and i almost always do.Playing on the computer is one of my favorite things to do.

I am also a vey friendly person and get along well with other people and work very nicely in a team.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?:10 hours

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you.:[Getting into a character and acting out adventures and stories]

In your own Words, describe what Metagaming and Powergaming are.

What do you expect this server will be like?:[Friendly,exiting and intresting in its own way]

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:[i have played the server minecraftvillage and a couple of my friends servers but

i thought i needed a little change and go on a more exiting server]

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:yes

How did you hear about us?:I found out about it from my brother takail

Have you voted for the Lord of the Craft on Minestatus? Which vote number were you? i haven't had a chance yet but i will

What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?:sindia

In-Character: Lily Rosesun

Character Name: Jaffacakes1432

What is your Race?: Elf

Biography(This should include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.):Once,lived two elfs in the

dark woods.One was a girl named Salina the other elf a male named Jonathan.Salina and Jonathan had been married for two years now,and Salina was pregnent with

a soon to be baby girl in about 2 weeks! One dark and misty night Salina screamed out in pain "AAHHH" Jonthan woke up in in a fright and shouted "Whats

the matter are you hurt?" "No im not hurt i think i might be having the baby! Salina cryed,as they both hoped onto Slinas beautiful black horse Jumper and

rode deep into the woods soon to find a old,rundown barn where Salina sat to rest.And all in the space of five hours beautiful Lily Rosesun was born.

When Lily woke up the next morning to find her pairents Salina and Jonathan gone.Although she was just a tiny baby she relised somthing was wrong and

that somthing,the most importent thing from her life was missing here Mum and Dad.Suddnly she bursed out into tears and a slight noise of footsteps coming

toward her and a femail elf peared over her.No i was not her mother but she seemed to remind her of Sindia's mother.'on gosh,Liam come here i found a

little baby girl and gess what she is an elf like us!' The strange femail eld shouted in joy."sorry what was that?,you found a baby in OUR barn how could

this of happened!" Liam cryed.For the last 10 years Lily lived with them happly.

One dark spooky night Lily was out hunting for monsters as Liam taught her how to be a hunter.She went deep into the forest with her bow and arrows.

she ran deeper into the forest and as she ran she saw a HUGE group of zombies and ran as fat as she could. she saw lit up place that she had never seen

before.she walked up to it and saw a man and cryed "Hello there,please help me my name is Lily Rosesun and i am being chaced ny a huge group of zombies!"

"Hello Lily, my name is John, and of corse ill help you come right in here and hide." The man said.Five minutes later Sindia was in a huge City and asked

"John what is the name of this city?" John replyed "well we call it Oren and lots of people live here."Sindia loved this place and lived there for ages

doing lots of things for people but her main quest is to find her real parents and as for John her and Lily became beat of friends.

Your characters ambitions:To find my real mother and father and to defeat the undead

Out in the Wilds, your character comes across a small cottage. Outside, there appears to be an elf struggling combat with two bandits. What does your char

cacter do?She slowly,sneaks behind a big tree and takes out the two bandits and asks the elf what happens and takes him to a safe place.]

Your character walks up to a shop in the middle of Al'Khazar. "Hello, my good sir!" says the shop owner. "What may I help you with today?" How does your ch

aracter answer?"Hello there good fellow,may i have one iron ingot?"

A screenshot of your skin: Sorry but i don't know how to get a screenshot onto notepad but my skin is an elf with a black hood, a brown belt,brown

shoes,blond hair, green eyes and sharp elf ears.

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Other Information:Lily is a kind elf and she loves to work in shops and would to run one.She is very friendly and makes friends very quickly.

[CosmicWhaleShark 2488]

Denied.

Things that need worked on/done

-you need to find out what meta and powergaming are, it is very important to know what these are to play the sever properly.

-you need a screenshots of your skin, I do not see it anywhere here.

-grammar, you will need to revise most of your bio, I had quite a hard time understanding all the events as well. I suggest revising the bio entirely if you want to be accepted.

-read the lore again, Oren is a country not a city. Little things like this stack against your odds of being accepted.

Suggestions:

-formatting, please don't bold everything, a little goes a long way, it is not required though merely a suggestion.

[CosmicWhaleShark 2488]

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