The Town Of Athusian Lore.

[Tempir Amedaius 12]

I want to start out with these questions:

Is it good? Rate it 1-10! 1 being absolutely bad. 10 being absolutely amazing.

Does it break lore?

What can I change?

Should I add it to my town charter, for lore?

Lore -

There once was a young boy, by the name of Luxferre, he grew up in the kingdom of Salvus. With his dad, by the name of Tempir, and his mother by the name of Diouse. He had quite a peaceful childhood, went to the lake, learning to fish. Learning how to take care of the farm and just basic things like that. However, Luxferre wanted to learn how to be a master in the art of swords. He was amazing, he was one of the best his teacher, Gias, has ever seen. He went to pratice everyday, working on his attacking, and blocking skills. Once he got a fairly good training in the art of the swords, he trained in the art of the bow. He was very skilled in both, as he practiced every day, for the next few years. When he was 17 he decided to join the Salvus Peacekeepers wishing to further his career in the art of the bow and sword. He realised that the Peacekeepers weren't the best fit for him, and they didn't train him very well. This doesn't mean however that Luxferre left Salvus, he still stayed there, protecting Salvus in times of need or despair, and he lived like that for a long time. At about the age of 25 he decided to leave Salvus and join the White Ravens, a guild. He loved being in the White Ravens, but realised that wasn't right for him either. So he went on a quest to find his true destiny, a dragon, by the name of Kilgharrah, helped him on his journey. He went to many different places around Asulon, and around the nations to find his destiny. He searched for a total of six years, until Kilgharrah told him where to go. The tower, of no name, the name is unknown. Inside there were many traps of death. There were poisonous gases, to spikes, to even arrows shooting at him through magic dispensers. He tried many times, to be only get hit once from his skills. He has trained, not for this exactly, but for things like this. At the end of the tower lies a Dragon egg. He takes this egg to Kilgharrah, the dragon then mentions that only he can open it. Luxferre then questions him "Why?" he asks multiple times. Kilgharrah then says.. "You are the last Dragonlord" only a Dragonlord can summon a dragon from its egg. The dragon hatches from his egg, and is named Athusian.

[Tempir Amedaius 12]

Any feedback is appreciated

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I do not think that dragons are known to Asulon except as an undead weapon.