Apareon's Death?

[Apareon 1]

((You would only see the following events if you were anywhere near Skravia. Although if you aren't then still feel free to comment. I need all of the writing tips I can get. This is my first RP post so there are bound to be mistakes galore. ^.^))

*Apareon stands on a cliff overlooking the river near Skravia. Knowing that he only has a short time to live till the curse begins to take effect. Finally finding his childhood friend Olette means that his goal in life is complete. It is almost time for him to pay the price of his curse.*

"I wish that every day could be like this." *Apareon says to himself. The sky is completely cloudless, the birds are singing, and the river is gently rolling by below.*

*Apareon could already feel the pain beginning to grow worse in his hands. He begins to fold up a piece of paper he was writing on, but the wind blows it out of his hands. He tries to grab it but stops mid grab. He lowers his arm and says.*

"Oh well, not like anyone really cared about me. My best friend has lost all of her memories of me. I have no skills whatsoever. I'm a burden to everyone around me......Maybe I should just die."

*Apareon now grasps at his stomach and doubles over as severe pain tears through his body. He tries to get up and go to the town for help but the pain is too much to bare. Falling down again Apareon thinks to himself.*

"My time has come. I shouldn't burden anyone with my death."

*Apareon tries to get up several times in the hope of maybe dying under a tree. Finally he is able to get up successfully but stumbles backwards as another wave of pain hits him. He feels the edge of the cliff with his heel just as he goes over the edge. As he is plummeting down to the river below he thinks.*

"Maybe it's better that I die this way....taking this curse with me."

*A crash of water.....then nothing.*

*The note floats on the wind eventually landing out side of Jake and Olette Johnson's door. It looks slightly crumpled. A blood stain is left in the top right corner. It is eventually swept aside and covered with snow.*

((Thank you for reading this. I am trying to improve my writing skills so any tips would be helpful. If you were involved with Apareon then I am making this post to give you some story to back up my character's disappearance. I will be switching chars pretty soon, but I will still be Apareon sometimes. I will reveal what is needed soon. Soon would be on the server, but if people want me too I can post what was happening (or rather what happened) on this thread.))

((One last thing to note. If you want your char to find the note that my char wrote, then message me on the forums so I can tell you what it says. Just for RP benefit of course.))

[SuperMaxo1000 0]

((This was amazing... One word... Wow.. and I didn't know he had a curse! :o))

[Apareon 1]

((This was amazing... One word... Wow.. and I didn't know he had a curse! :o))

((It was kept a secret the whole time. ^.^))

[Moiruh(BlazieGal) 6]

Omg...the rp failed a little.

[Anderssn 1115]

well writen, good job!

[Archmage_Cataris 622]

((Very well written! Great job mate! If only I knew where Skvravia was :\ ))

[Anderssn 1115]

((Very well written! Great job mate! If only I knew where Skvravia was :\ ))

Dont worry! Just ask people if they know the Johnsons.... If not then i could guide you but i still wanna stay away from metaing!

[Apareon 1]

((Thank you guys for all of the nice comments. ^.^ I never knew I was good at writing......Oh well, live and learn. XD))

[Anderssn 1115]

Yeah, well keep writing and good luck![]

[Ferebrill 14]

Any leads on how to investigate our death, I didn't know you that well but I'm dying to get some rp in.

[steelersfan1221 300]

Moved to the Great Library. It shall be sorted into appropriate category shortly.