My Application

[voll27 1]

Out-Of-Character

Minecraft Account Name:voll27

How old are you?:13

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:United States of America

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:yes

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:I am "5,6" and male. I am not easy to troll and I like Daft Punk

How much time could you be on the server weekly?:Friday nighits, saturdays,and sundays

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you:playing as sombody that is sort of like you but not.

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?: I have Had No Experiance

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is:its learning information out of game and applying it ingame.

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Gaming is:Completly over powering your enimes.

What do you expect this server will be like?: I dont know.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:I played on electric creeper and left because the mads took my money

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:yes

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules:yes

How did you hear about us?:my friends

Have you voted for the Lord of the Craft on Minestatus? Which vote number were you?:I Have Not

In-Character:

Character Name:Kourakuma

What Race are you?:Orc

What Sub-Race are you? (note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race):

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc:i am a male, very tall, and i wear green clothes. i am quick to anger, talented with a blade and am a good builder. i am a skilled hunter,chef, and miner.

I was born under a Orc roof and was trained by my father, my mother was murdered by a creeper pit trap that i built on the front step. i wish to take out my anger on the other races around me except orc and i am a skilled assassin.

What is your Character's ambitions?:go to war agist somebody.

What is your character’s favorite tool? (sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc):Sword

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents? trained with a bow.

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format):

Other Information about your Character:when near explosives i get very twichy

Open-Response-Questions

Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond? he stoped the armed warroiors only to turn on the halfling and demand helthy reward

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response? Are those made by Dwarvs? if so i will not buy them.

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?:i would go inside chech to see if there was anybody there then take the stuff

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you you in the common tongue, how do you respond? hello do you think you could spare any food for a hungty orc?

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offeringe a reward for any who offer their support. How does your character act on this information?:i will help you defeat your enimies and i hope that these enemies are hard to kill for i need a challange to keep me busy

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My apologies, but your application has been...

Why did I deny you?

Your formatting was not the greatest, you need to expand on your biography and fix your definitions of meta/powergaming. Also, expand on your ORQ's.

Some Places That May Help You

Avoiding Bad Characters: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/27643-how-to-avoid-making-a-mary-suegary-stu/

Fixing Formatting: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/42682-a-guide-for-applicants/page__p__303005__fromsearch__1#entry303005

Please WAIT 24 hours before reposting, failure to do so will result in denial.

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