Dnaxxkylexx1S Application

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Out-Of-Character

Minecraft Account Name:Dnaxxkylexx1

How old are you?:14

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:United states

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:yes

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:i am a 14 year old Russian boy that loves to Role play (in games), yet keeping to my self most of the time.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?:20+ hours a week

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you:role playing to me refers to taking a role of an existing character or person and acting it out with a partner taking someone Else's role

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?:I used to be a Moderator in a Half-life2 role play server.

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is:Meta-gameing is basically useing information that you got O.O.C and useing it in game sutch as in o.o.c 2 people say hey lets go hide in this wall and another person is like "well i know there here" and does there thing to them even tho there in character self doesnt know.

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Gaming is:Power-gameing is basically giving your self more power than you have like as if you said "Punches <person> killing them" and giving them no chance to react.

What do you expect this server will be like?:i think this server will be a fun place for many people who like Role playing in a lord of the rinngs world.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:i have played on the moosevally pvp server before but i learned about ROle plaing servers and desided to quit moosevally. and pvp servers in General

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:yes

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules:yes

How did you hear about us?:i have been watching the youtube channels vidioes for 3-5 weeks now

Have you previously made an Application? If so could you link us to your last Application?:no

In-Character

Character Name:Nikolai Glean

What Race are you?:Human

What Sub-Race are you? (note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race):

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.):Nikolai is young 18 year old man he grew up with no father and lived a self secluded life He mostly keeps to him self he seems to always where's a back shirt with a thin cut at the neck of the shirt reviling some dried blood Because Nikolai lived out of the picture as a child find others misery Enjoyable, now having a verry devious smile on his face with his pale as snow skin and his bald head contenues his life to him self and doesnt bother others but still keeps the disturbing smile that sends chills down others spins.Nikolai is quiet seems harmless but in the right contentions can be classified as dangerous and cold.

What is your Character's ambitions?:Nikolai's ambitions are to live a normal life even after going through a hard childhood

What is your character’s favorite tool? (sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc):My characters faviorit tool is a bow and arrow

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents?:being quick and able to escape "sticky" situations quickly with almost lightning reflexes

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format):

Other Information about your Character:i am a excellent hunts man so i never go hungry.

Open-Response-Questions

Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond?:I would not bother to help and would probably laugh at others misfourtion.

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response?:Say nothing And as i walk by bull out a small weapon and take his wares.

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?:walk in and steal the equipment but if i hear someone saying "my things have been stolen" i would return it.

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you you in the common tongue, how do you respond?:quietly purchases some food.

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offer their support. How does your character act on this information?:i would hide in trees or in a well covered position and take them out with bows one by one.

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Why did I deny you?

Character seems villainous...

Your biography and your ambitions included villainous acts. These acts cannot be undertaken on the server without the use of a villain application. You cannot obtain a villain application unless you are an active member of the server for at least a week, meaning that we cannot accept this app with villainous deeds included.

Skin did not fit roleplay...

Your skin was not a roleplaying skin, meaning that it does not fit the time period and had irregular features,

ORQs were short...

Short answers in the ORQ section are not adequate. We need to know what your character sees, thinks, smells, feels and hears in that situation, to an extent that we are there, and we know exactly how your character would react if it were allowed into the world of Asulon.

ORQs were in future tense...

You answered your ORQs in the future tense. Your character is there right now, in that situation, and he is acting right now. There is no 'I would' there is 'Bob IS'. For he is there, and he is in that circumstance. You need to roleplay as you would on the server, as your character would. He is there, what is he doing? Is he running? Is he fighting? He does not get to plan ahead, there is no ‘would’ there is ‘is’ and ‘are’. Present, not future.

Some Places That May Help You

Avoiding Bad Characters: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/27643-how-to-avoid-making-a-mary-suegary-stu/

Fixing Formatting: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/42682-a-guide-for-applicants/page__p__303005__fromsearch__1#entry303005

Some Tips: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/19145-tips-to-include-on-your-application/

A Question Analysis: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/34777-in-depth-analysis-of-the-application-form/

A FAQ: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/30081-application-submissions-faq-proper-etiquette/

Server Rules: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/?page_id=8

Latest Format: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/43580-official-lord-of-the-craft-application-format/

Definitions (Seriously Useful): http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/45364-roleplayingmetagamingpowergaming-definitions/

Please WAIT 24 hours before reposting, failure to do so will result in denial.

If you have any questions, add me on Skype, or PM me on the forums.

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