Rob888 Application #1

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Minecraft Account Name: Rob888

How old are you?: 16

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:USA, central time.

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: Yes

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: A fan of role playing games. A person who likes architechure and to have fun.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?: 3-4 hours

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you: I know little form my dnd group. To know what roleplaying to me is like not geting out of character unless something seriouse just happened.

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?: I played a little DnD and DDO.

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is: Hard-core gaming with a enviroment that will inspire you to play better.

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Gaming is: Fast/accurate playing which is like to kill with as few hits and as fast as you can, or build as fast as you can with the lest mistakes.

What do you expect this server will be like?: This server seems to be a good area to trade/battle/build a good base, not easy tho.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: lgmax,left not big enough, drn, tward the end and it was taken down, and left4green, it big enough but too many people abuse the world(took random blocks and made random houses).

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: yes, I have.

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules: Yes

How did you hear about us?: 2 of my freinds play on the server

Have you previously made an Application? If so could you link us to your last Application?: I have not

In-Character:

Character Name: Shruber

What Race are you?: Elven

What Sub-Race are you? (note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race):N/A

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.):

Shruber is a elven farm boy that had a hard life as a kid. When he was 5 his dad went off to war and was killed. When he was 9 his mother became very ill. On his 15 birthday his mother died and he was the only one left in his family.

From there he worked on the farm and made a honest living. When his 24 birthday came he set out in the forest to make a new life. he saved up enough money for supplies and took his lucky bow and went out.

What is your Character's ambitions?: To becaome skilled with the bow and make a living.

What is your character’s favorite tool? (sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc): bow

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents?: farming and hunting

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format):

Other Information about your Character: He is very culmsy, so easly stuck in traps

Open-Response-Questions

Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond? He would probly attack the warriors, but can be encourage not to if bribed.

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response? He would ask "What clothes he has to sell."

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?: My character would loot or set up a home there for a cuople days seeing who lives there.

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you you in the common tongue, how do you respond? Ask if they have any supplies i can use and if so could i have them and if they say no would try to steal at night.

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offer their support. How does your character act on this information?: first thing is I would go out try to talk to the bandits if they will pay more to know of this and how many and if they dont pay i would go back and accept.

[Thu'um 530]

Your Application has been...

DENIED [X]

Put on PENDING [ ]

Reason(s) Why Your Application Was Denied:

[[X's mark the parts you need to rectify.]]

Out of Character:

Missing Areas [ ]

Bad Information [ ]

Role Play:

Missing Biography [ ]

-Short Biography [X]

Insufficient Information in OOC [ ]

-Insufficient/Incorrect Information in Metagaming Definition [X]

-Insufficient/Incorrect Information in Powergaming Definition [X]

Insufficient Knowledge on Role Play [X]

Insufficient Knowledge of the World [X]

Incorrect Lore / Other-Worldly Lore [X]

-Open Response Questions are Lacking [X]

-Response Questions could use some Work. [X]

-Fabricated Places/Large-Scale Events [ ]

-Unreal Scenarios [ ]

Bouts of Powergaming [ ]

Bouts of Metagaming [ ]

Conflicting Answers [ ]

Character is Cliche [X]

Requires a Villain Application [X]

Form:

Bad Spelling/Grammar [X]

Missing Areas [ ]

Breaking Rules [ ]

Cliche [ ]

Plagiarized [ ]

Skin:

Missing Skin [ ]

-Skin Doesn't Fit Character [ ]

-Incorrect Character Description [ ]

-Incorrect Skin Format [X]

-Unloreful Skin [ ]

Other Comments:

Overall your application lacked detail and effort.

The reasons that resulted in your denial are disclosed / marked above.

If you have any further inquiries, you can direct them to me via a Private Message. Good Luck, and you may re-Apply AFTER A 24 HOUR PERIOD, thank you~

[Thu'um 530]

Moved to Denied Forum