Lu'inbals 2Nd App [Denied]

[Angel~ 34]

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Gender: Lu'Inbal Ilanci

Age: 26

Appearence: Lu'Inbal's Clothing has been torn and ripped from the fights and falls she has encountered through her time and the only place for her to put belongings is her small pouche , she has a red belt that stands out from the rest of her outfit which makes her slightly easier to be spotted in the dark. Her Height isn't very impressive she is 5ft and weights about 30 pounds , Her Regular clothing is very torn and ripped , its very dark and poorly made.

Personality: Lu'Inbal Is Fast a night when the moons down , she is most interested in the spiders and her culture. Lu'Inbal Is not always kind heart'd but if she gets to know you she will play around , She also isn't the brightest of all she'll sometime's make mistakes and cant always be taught easily and will sometimes stray of from the task at hand but she can also be flirty and kind with most people. She always has a small dagger with her at all time's just in case

Biography: Lu'Inbal's life was not good at most time's her father left at a young age and her mother didn't always earn enough money for food , Even when she got some money her mother would spend it on drinks or drugs , Lu'Inbal would sometime's have to get her own money by hunting rats or other creatures she could find and sell them for money and use that money to by food or some clothing . She was home schooled but was never fully taught what she needed to get far in the world , She would sometimes get in fights with other female's and come out with scars or scratches but in most times she'd win , Her Scares where heal by the monks since she couldn't find her mother . She would mostly try to make some friends but never did and once more came out with scars , Her Only friend was killed in the Alure d'aphyon .

Your characters ambitions: She wants to try to survive her longest and gain more money to explore the world and TRY to make a friend , she also wants to get a bow and some tools for her life

===Roleplay Related Questions===

As your character wanders the back-streets of Menorcress, you sight a cloaked figure lurking in one of the shadowed nook behind the Brothel: a rustle of cloth is heard, and the figure ushers you in with a skeletal finger. The hooded figure imparts information involving a conspiracy to over-throw the House of Miiystra, and offers you a hefty sum of coin to partake in the planned attack. How does your character react? : She would get confused and scared from the skeletal finger as she backs up she yells "Guards! , This man wants to over-throw the House of Miiystra!. Come help!" As she says this the man's finger recedes into the shadows once more groaning , She hear's sound of a bow string and she gets into a defensive postion . The arrow is fired and she is hit in the leg by it . The Guards Show up seeing her injurg'd they look at the figure in the shadows and charge towards while one carry's her to the monk's for healing.

Your character finds him/herself watching the Alure d'aphyon: the several fighters within the void maze wield only sticks as they prove their prowess as warriors by battling to the death. One of fighters happens to be a close companion of yours, and you witness him being strategically cornered by three of the other fighters and beaten to death. While the crowd cheers in celebration of the violence, and the death of your friend. How does your character react? : She see's her friend beaten to death and looks at the crowd cheering but says nothing to nervous to talk but inside she is mad and sad at what has come to her friend in the ring , She later try's to see her dead friend and gets mad at herself and later continues Sharpening and practices her dagger skills . She begins to forget about her lose and starts to lose memory of her friend

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[Amethain 25]

Age: 26

Appearence: Lu'Inbal's Clothing has been torn and ripped from the fights and falls she has encountered through her time and the only place for her to put belongings is her small pouche , she has a red belt that stands out from the rest of her outfit which makes her slightly easier to be spotted in the dark. Her Height isn't very impressive she is 5ft and weights about 30 pounds , Her Regular clothing is very torn and ripped, its very dark and poorly made.

~~ The age of Lu'Inbal is 26 years old

(is this in Human years or Mori Years? either way its EXTREMELY young. Here is the Mori vs Human years basic maturity guide again. What this shows is that the child would be barely more than an infant, or a young infant if in human years.)

Infancy: 1 - 25

Childhood: 26 - 50 years

Adolescence: 51 - 119 years

Adulthood: 120 - 199 years

Middle Age: 200 - 299 years

Old: 300 - 369 years

Venerable: 370+ years

Death age/Maximum age: 600

~~ She is small, only 5 ft tall and she wears a red belt that makes her easier to see in the dark.

(Would she not want to hide and be less visible if she was weak and very skittish. Also, Weak + Small is never a good combination in Menorcress.)

~~ She is 5 ft tall and weighs a mere 30 lbs

(That means she is lighter than some suits of armor were. She would be less than a stick figure to be that tall and that light.)

~~ Her clothing is torn and poorly made.

(Why would it be so torn and terribly made? Couldn't you have had it repair or stolen a nicer pair?)

Personality: Lu'Inbal Is Fast a night when the moons down, she is most interested in the spiders and her culture. Lu'Inbal Is not always kind heart'd but if she gets to know you she will play around , She also isn't the brightest of all she'll sometime's make mistakes and cant always be taught easily and will sometimes stray of from the task at hand but she can also be flirty and kind with most people. She always has a small dagger with her at all time's just in case.

~~ She gets to know you she might play around

(Mostly this seems alright, except she should not really be trusting of anyone. I am not sure if that's what you meant but, she shouldn't be overtly trusting of others.)

Biography: Lu'Inbal's life was not good at most time's her father left at a young age and her mother didn't always earn enough money for food , Even when she got some money her mother would spend it on drinks or drugs , Lu'Inbal would sometime's have to get her own money by hunting rats or other creatures she could find and sell them for money and use that money to by food or some clothing . She was home schooled but was never fully taught what she needed to get far in the world , She would sometimes get in fights with other female's and come out with scars or scratches but in most times she'd win , Her Scares where heal by the monks since she couldn't find her mother . She would mostly try to make some friends but never did and once more came out with scars , Her Only friend was killed in the Alure d'aphyon .

Your characters ambitions: She wants to try to survive her longest and gain more money to explore the world and TRY to make a friend , she also wants to get a bow and some tools for her life

~~ Her wounds were healed by the monks

(The Mori have their own priestesses who take care of wounds and injuries)

~~ She tried to make friends and came out with scars

(Therefore she strives to make more friends, which may very possibly lead to even more scars.)

~~ Her only friend was killed

(Serves him right to be so weak as to make a trustworthy friend)

As your character wanders the back-streets of Menorcress, you sight a cloaked figure lurking in one of the shadowed nook behind the Brothel: a rustle of cloth is heard, and the figure ushers you in with a skeletal finger. The hooded figure imparts information involving a conspiracy to over-throw the House of Miiystra, and offers you a hefty sum of coin to partake in the planned attack. How does your character react? :

She would get confused and scared from the skeletal finger as she backs up she yells "Guards! , This man wants to over-throw the House of Miiystra!. Come help!" As she says this the man's finger recedes into the shadows once more groaning , She hear's sound of a bow string and she gets into a defensive postion . The arrow is fired and she is hit in the leg by it . The Guards Show up seeing her injured they look at the figure in the shadows and charge towards while one carry's her to the monk's for healing.

~~ The figure shoots her with a single arrow

(Would it not run and hide its identity? or kill her with a more lethal shot?)

~~ Once again the Monks

(yeah we have priestesses)

Your character finds him/herself watching the Alure d'aphyon: the several fighters within the void maze wield only sticks as they prove their prowess as warriors by battling to the death. One of fighters happens to be a close companion of yours, and you witness him being strategically cornered by three of the other fighters and beaten to death. While the crowd cheers in celebration of the violence, and the death of your friend. How does your character react? :

She see's her friend beaten to death and looks at the crowd cheering but says nothing to nervous to talk but inside she is mad and sad at what has come to her friend in the ring , She later try's to see her dead friend and gets mad at herself and later continues Sharpening and practices her dagger skills . She begins to forget about her lose and starts to lose memory of her friend.

~~ She gets mad at herself because he died

(Why? he was weak, that just proved it.)

Sorry, Denied for being unrealistic and minor problems with the Lore

[Danny 2232]

Moved to the Great Library. It shall be sorted into appropriate category shortly.