:) My Fourth Application

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Out-Of-Character

Minecraft Account Name: BadPumkin987

How old are you?: 12

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: Not sure of the time-zone, but I live in California.

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: Yes, I believe I do.

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: Hmm.. Funny, nice, lovable :D. short-tempered. My hobbies include riding my bike, reading, acting (improv), and making the world look prettier with gardening. :D

How much time could you be on the server weekly?: Depends. About.. 5-10 hours a week? Random things pop up in my schedule.

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you: I think RolePlaying is acting. Living out dreams. Being able to become what you choose. Having fun!

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?: Actually, this is the first MineCraft server I have found that actually RolePlays! Jackpot for me! I want to have fun, acting!

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is: Meta-Gaming is when your RP character uses information that he/she should not have. In my head, I would call it cheating. We should not use Meta-Gaming because it is using unknown knowledge to do something, which is cheating.In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Emoting is:

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Emoting is: Power-Emoting is when a RP character does something, but doesn't give the one he/she is RolePlaying with a chance to react. Example: Lets say we have a character. Lets call her JBJ. JBJ is going hunting for a crocodile because she was hired by an archaeologist to get a tooth so the archaeologist could compare it from a tooth he found in the ground. JBJ sneaks up behind a crocodile, and shoots her bow, killing it instantly. That is Power-Emoting. This would be the better thing to do: JBJ sneaks up behind a crocodile, and attempts to shoot it. The crocodile turns around as he hears the arrow whiz by his ear. That would be not Power-Emoting.

What do you expect this server will be like?: I expect this server to be FUN!!! I'm excited because I have made many friends while being a WS! They are all very friendly and tell me that this server is the best. They sounded like they were right!!

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: Hmm.. well. I didn't leave them. I will still play on them every.. oh.. lets say every other day. But only for like, 30 minutes. The servers I still play on are AeroCraft and MineRP.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: Yes. I do agree to the rules of Lord of the Craft. I have had some problems on other servers, and I hope this doesn't happen here.

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules: Well, I probably won't use TeamSpeak, but I agree to all those rules, anyways.

How did you hear about us?: I have heard of you from a few friends, and mainly online. My reliable source: Yahoo answers!

Have you previously made an Application? If so could you link us to your last Application?: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/61232-my-third-application-d/

In-Character:

Character Name: Kristen A Soufay

What Race are you? (You may only be Human, Orc, Elf or Dwarf!) : Elf! :D

What Sub-Race are you? (note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race): None.

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.): "Ma, it's getting cold!" Kristen A. Soufay, age 13, yelled over the noise of the wind and flakes blowing across her face. "Don't worry, sweetie. We'll be home soon." They had been walking for hours across the Arctic. Suddenly, a loud CRACK stopped them in their tracks. "Ma! What's happening!?" Kristen screamed. The ice below them was splitting! "Kristen! Go!" Kristen's mother, Janie, told her daughter. "Keep on running 'till you hit the forest! Then the trees will tell you where to go!" Janie screamed a horrible scream as she sank, lower into the dark waves. "Ma!!" Kristen yelled. She turned around, and started to run. Faster, she thought. Do as ma told me to do! She couldn't bear to turn back to the crack in the ice that had killed her mother.

(A year later)

"Sheila! Watch this! And don't spill that hot coco!" Kristen, age 12, said to her friend. "Okay, Kristen! I won't drop this on you!" Sheila pretended to almost spill her hot-chocolate all over Kristen. "Whoops! I better watch where I hold this!" Sheila, age 12, was quite the joker. Kristen had met her at the orphanage where she had gone after that terrible day her mother fell into the ocean. Kristen shuddered to think about it. "Sheila! I'm not kidding! Look what Persephone can do!" Kristen laughed when Pershephone, her pup, balanced a bouncy ball on her nose, then threw it up, and caught it in her mouth. "Good poochie, Persephone!" Sheila praised. Persephone loved to be praised, but not to be called "Poochie". Persephone stood up, and stretched. Then, she tensed suddenly as if she had heard someone in the house. She started to growl, and then, Persephone got ready to pounce on the figure that stood behind the girl's backs.

(A month later)

Kristen loved the way she could run so fast. She admired how slow Saria was compared to her. "Kristen! Slow down!" Saria yelled out. They had been running for minutes, and already Saria wanted to stop. Kristen's long, dark brown hair stopped flying out behind her as she stopped, and ran to where Saria was standing. "How can those pretty, color changing eyes of yours be so full of life and excitement?!" Saria groaned. "What color are my eyes now?" "Purple" Saria muttered. She wasn't much of a runner. "Well, I think your green hair is pretty, Saria," Kristen admired how her friends hair was so cute in the bob it was in. "Kristen, how can you possibly be so not tired? I hate running!" Saria joked, as she lightly punched Kristen on the shoulder. Kristen was a perky tall 14 year old that had color changing eyes and long, straight, dark brown hair. She was thin and lean. She loved to run and work out. Kristen had met Saria right after the intruder had broken into her home. Persephone had tried to fight the strange person, but she was stabbed right in the heart. Sheila didn't run fast enough to get out of the house. Kristen remembered the blood-hurdeling scream she had shrieked. She didn't like to remember that night. Kristen was the only one who didn't get killed. She had run into the forest, and stumbled upon Saria. They had both became friends, and walked the the nearest town to call the authorities. Now, they were hanging out at the most popular place that they could possibly be at: The Root Beer. They were hanging out with some friends they had met when they moved to Normandor. Kristen had many more adventures to go, but now was a time to relax.

TBC

What are your Character's ambitions?: To help all whom need it. She hopes not to let them down.

What is your character’s favorite tool? (sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc): Bow and arrow.

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents? Gardening and shooting her bow. She also loves to hunt.

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format, if you do not know how to acquire one, copy and paste this link into your browser: ( http://tinyurl.com/Lotcscreenshot ): Look in the attachments, please.

Other Information about your Character: Not much. She is probable to hold a grudge, but she is also very loving. She loves all animals.

Open-Response-Questions

Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond? Kristen's so angry that the warriors would do this type of thing! She goes over to them and says "If you do ONE thing to this halfling, I will report you to the authorities." The warriors look at her, and say "Well well, if it isn't Ms. Soufay, here to kick our butts with her words?" They break into laughter, and Kristen pulls out a pen and piece of paper. She writes a small note, and then whistles for her dove. Okay, little Theo. You wanna take this message to the nice General?" The warriors ask "What's in the letter?" "Oh, only a complaint about two warriors in front of the Cloud Temple harassing a Halfling." Kristen says calmly. The warriors take off, heading towards the unknown. "Th-thank you, miss." The halfling says. "No problem. When the nice General gets here, we'll tell him what happened."

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response? Hello. Do you by chance have any seeds or saplings I could buy? I am making a go-green club, and I need more seeds because we ran out." Kristen asks in a sweeter-than-cherries voice. "Of course, young las! How many?" "As many as you've got." Kristen then adds, "Would you like to join the club? It's free" The man says "Why, that would be delightful!" Then Kristen shows him the map to where the club is held.

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?: Kristen takes a look, but she is not very good with a sword. She looks at it for a few minutes, and then she puts it back. Then she examines the hut, tidying it up just in case the owner comes back someday. She then leaves the hut alone and continues her game of Hide-and-Seek with Saria.

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you you in the common tongue, how do you respond? "Hello! How are you today? I was just planting some trees, and it is getting dark. May I stay here for the night? If I say so myself, I can cook up a pretty good soup!" Kristen says, and is welcomed into the camp. She then gets her soup ready for everyone, and goes to help a little human girl with making a stick-doll. When her soup is ready, she serves it to everyone. She spends the night in a spare tent, and then sets out at the break of dawn, giving her wishes to the camp that they would have a nice life.

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offer their support. How does your character act on this information?: She asks a guard if she can help with the archers, and the guard says yes. So she sits and talks with the archers until a bandit comes along, and then they all get ready to shoot if the bandit makes a move to do something bad. The bandit tries to blow the walls up with TNT, but before he can get to the wall, Kristen relizes what he is doing, and shoots. Her arrow hits the target, and he falls. The guards go inspect him, and they found several lighters and 3 stacks of TNT. The archers congratulate her, and she thanks them.

Anything else you would like to say?: Not much. I hope you enjoyed! :D

[Lego XBOX 915]

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Thy application presents many incoherencies.

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These were the main points which were confusing and unexplained of thou application:

~Thou hath used incorrect Lore, mortal fool. There be no pens an a world of fantasy!

~Thy biography seems mixed up, one year after thou art aged 13, thou turns 12? Furthermore, how did thee survive out in the wilderness and how did thee learn thy skills that thou speakest of? Thou should explain all of this in the bio and concentrate less on a pretty happy story which has little to do with thy character's learning sequence.

~As mentioned by another Application Team Member, thy MUST explain how thou eyes change color and why otherwise thou cannot use this character...

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In the time thou fix these horrors thy could re-apply, nevertheless only 24 hours after thou latest application. Use thy time gracefully and send me a PM if thou hast any further inquiries.

Is it not clear!?

Note- it is tradition to use the royal 'we' and old Canterlot voice, and to use THIS MUCH VOLUME WHEN SPEAKING TO OUR APPLICANTS!

[Lego XBOX 915]

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