My Second Whitelist App

[tiger2215 0]

Out-Of-Character

Minecraft Account Name:tiger2215

How old are you?:12.

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:U.S.A Eastern.

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:Yes.

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:I am 12 years old. I love to hang out with my friends.I'M in the most advanced classes in 7th grade.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?:Four to five hours.

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you:What role playing means to mes is where you have a character and when you do a quest or kill a mob or enemy you get experience which helps you level up your character.

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?:I dont have that much experience in role playing other than some skyrim or rift.

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is:A strategy game.

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Emoting is:I have no idea sorry.

What do you expect this server will be like?:A mixture of a role playing game, a meta gaming game, and a load of fun.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:I have played on one other server and I don't want to say what it was because they might see this but it was terrible.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:Yes.

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules:How did you hear about us?:Yes indeed.

Have you previously made an Application? If so could you link us to your last Application?:Yes this is my second application.

In-Character:Character Name:Vodie Cour.

What Race are you? (You may only be Human, Orc, Elf or Dwarf!) :Dwarf because who dosent like to dig.

What Sub-Race are you? (note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race):I have no sup race.

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.):My mother was 45 years old and works in the mines. Her name is Andriel Cour until a few years ago when she died in a cave in everybody loved my mother she was very kind and fun. That was a very tragic time in me my brother and fathers life my father was so sad he had stoped drinking ale for a few years. it was also very hard on my brother .

My father was also working in the mines.His name was linxe Cour.For a short while after my mother died a war broke out between the elves and the rest of my kind.The dwarves were blaming the elves for causing the cave in that made my mother and alot of other die. My father signed up to be a soldier to get revenge on the elves during the final battle he was shot by an elf archer which gave him a severe injury.He came home after the war and died shortly after because of his injurys.My father was only 46 when he died.

There is not much to tell about my brother he is only 9 years old.His name is raxford cour.He has always loved to count money so i think he will be a banker instead of a miner.He was just a toddle when his mom died he could barely even walk.

As for me i am Vogie Cour call me Vog for short .I am 12 years old.I have been caring for my brother ever since my father died. I have been working in the mines since i was six years old.I am a skilled fighter when I have a sword.My most favorite thing in the world is gold.When ever i find gold in the mines i sneak some out for me and my brother.

What are your Character's ambitions?:To become rich.

What is your character’s favorite tool? (sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc):Pickaxe

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents?Mining.

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format, if you do not know how to acquire one, copy and paste this link into your browser: ( http://tinyurl.com/Lotcscreenshot ):Other Information about your Character:He is one tough son of a gun.

Open-Response-QuestionsWhilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond?My character would say if you leave him alone I will buy you a drink in the bar.And we will call it even.

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response?No thanks but whhere is the nearest mine

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?:Take the sword it is gold plus dwarf equals must have.

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you you in the common tongue, how do you respond?I just ask for food ale and directions and more ale.

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offer their support. How does your character act on this information?:I would say yes I will help I must help the town in any way i can!

Anything else you would like to say?:I would like to thank you guys for making such a great server.

[Taiga 764]

Your Application Has Been:

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Reason(s)Why Your Application Was Denied [Correct the X'ed Areas]:

Role Play:

Missing Biography [ ]

-Short Biography [ ]

Insufficient Information in OOC [ ]

Insufficient Knowledge on Role Play [ ]

Insufficient Knowledge on the World [X]

Open Ended Questions Need Refining [X]

Illegal Character Abilities [ ]

Unrealistic Events [ ]

-Fabricated Large-Scale Events [ ]

Incorrect Lore [ ]

Power/Metagaming [ ]

Contradicting Statements [ ]

Cliche [ ]

Villain Application Needed [ ]

Incorrect Definitions of Powergaming [X]

Incorrect Definitions of Metagaming [X]

Form:

Bad Spelling/Grammar [ ]

Missing Areas [ ]

Breaking Rules [ ]

Skin:

Missing Skin [ ]

-Skin Doesn't Fit Character [ ]

-Incorrect Character Description [ ]

-Incorrect Skin Format [ ]

-Unlore-ful Skin [ ]

Other Comments:

I'm sorry, but your application is lacking in a few aspects that had eventually lead to it's denial.

Primarily, your definition of metagaming and powergaming isn't on par with our server's adage. Please use the link below for an accurate and up-to-date definition of metagaming and powergaming that pertains to our server's own usage of the terms.

Secondly, your biography is lacking in any indication of lore knowledge. Please be advised, in order to join our server, some knowledge of lore must be presented to prove that you have understood and are accommodated to our server's adage. Please read the lore on the website, forums, and/or the wiki to take a glimpse of what our server has done for the past year. Then, implement some lore knowledge that is valid such as city names, nations, and large scale events. Also, please be advised that all lore that is /current/ must pertain to Asulon, not Aegis. Having your character being born from old cities is fine, but be aware that all current adventures your character will embark upon will be in Asulon.

Lastly, I would like you to improve your Open Response Questions. They require further elaboration, such as character dialogue, your character's emotions, what they are thinking, etc. This will indubitably aid in the progression of your application. Be aware that every scenario will be seen at an in-game approach, so no powergaming or metagaming is allowed. The lore included (if you so happen to include some) must also be applicable to our server as well.

I wish you good luck on your next application!

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=Remember, you are coming to Asulon to Develop a character! Not have one already established!=

Deinition of Powergaming/Metagaming Here: http://redgies-rp.co.uk/forum/index.php?topic=33703.0

Please remember that you may not reapply two times within a 24 hour time period.

[Taiga 764]

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