Applicaton Submission, Walfacon

[Warchief_98 0]

minecraft account name ? : warchief_98

how old are you ? : 16

time zone : GMT+/--2:00

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar? : yes

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: Im 16 years old, I like to play games such as

minecraft. I do not curse I play with respect and honor I admire Owners, Admins And other

Players. And I keep in charackter always.

how much time would you be on the server weekly: 30 ours +/-

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you: Its

something where you can act like someone els, Be like in a movie where you can say what to

do and what you will become. Its means alot probebly because I like it so much.

What experience have you had in Roleplaying : I have played on some roleplay server's

they really liked me I always kept on the rules, like I sad before I like it so why would

ruin it ?

What do you expect this server will be like?: I see a lot of people love it, and I love

roleplay server's, I expect this server Is a great place to come after school just to relax

and play.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: I have played on my

own roleplay server> I left it becouse i had to less money, and there where almost no

donators.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: yes [it took some time ;p]

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules:

Yes I do !!

How did you hear about us?: Youtube : http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_a96H78u8yo&feature=related

Have you previously made an Application? If so could you link us to your last Application?:

No, it was a long time ago.

Character Name : Walfacon

What Race are you? : Dwarf

Biography : I was born in a Village named Urock. I lived there with my father and mother.

I had a great time, sometimes my father took me with him into the mine so i could learn

things mom din't like it but it was amezing in there you saw al the villages dwarf's working

When i turned 10 I helpt my father mining ores, so we could live from the money we made on

it Only than one day That day i will never forget. I was minning with my father when we

found diamond ore, My father was so happy he run at it But when he put his pick at the spot

the ground started shaking the floor felt into the lava and i saw my father BURN, He's last

word's where son you have made me proud, from that day I have get the diamonds and made a

pickaxe of it with my father's name on it. I never worked so hard our village was becoming

a city me and my friends build walls so big that they would never fall. all dwarfes around

the city came by just to look, than came that day where my father died. Every time that

day comes i lock myself up with his pick, clothes and food just to remember how great he

was to me and our village. but it never stoped me from the inn, It was called to my father

Joseph urock's inn. Now these days i protect the town and server it.

What are your Character's ambitions?: play, meet people and roleplay.

What is your character’s favorite tool? : sword

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents? Guarding

A screenshot of your skin

Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling,

being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying

to steal money from him, how does your character respond? :

become angry and fight with al my hearth for him, may i lose i die with honor!!

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response? :

ssry I don't need anything right now, have a nice day.

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you you in the common tongue, how do you respond? :

Im so hungry can I please get some i will repay with work, Please !!

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offer their support. How does your character act on this information?:

He would offer help and don't want a reward for helping bring them to justice !!

Anything else you would like to say?:I hope you will accpet my request!!

friendly regards Walfacon !!

[Thu'um 530]

Denied.

Please reapply after 24 hours.

Your Application is Poorly Formatted.

Your Roleplaying Definition is Incorrect.

Your Application is Incomplete, missing:

- Your Metagaming Definition

- Your Powergaming Definition

Your Character could use a surname.

Your Biography does not have properly implemented lore.

Your Biography is far too short/does not meet the minimum requirements.

Your Open Response Questions are bunched up and not detailed enough. They do not show what your character will do in the predefined scenarios.

[Thu'um 530]

Moved to Denied Forum