Henry's 2nd Mori app

[henrya15 25]

MC Name: HenryA15

Mori Name: Vhaisse Vlen'shryd

Age (In Mori and Human): 7 human years old and 30 Mori years old.

Mother's Name: Tinost'i of house Vlen'shryd

Appreance: A samll child with pale eyes, snow white hair, and light gray skin. Vhaisse wears a tattered black and violet loincloth most times. He stands 5ft tall and 100 pounds.

Brief History: Vhaisse birth ritaul was a happy one. During this celebration he was given his private name of Vhaisse. After some time Vhaisse decided on a public name of Yorn. Yorn was taught from birth never to show any signs of weakness, being beaten when he did. This made Yorn a silent, spending most o his time alone exploring the caverns of Menorcress. Yorn uses this silence to listen to everything, paying close attention to all conversations heard. He learned many things while listening to his parents such as who to worship and who to show respect to. Yorn is looking into becoming an Alchemist, His father Lar'pa teaches him mot of what he knows the rest he reads from his father's books.

Skin: Attached to the file

[Amethain 25]

There are three reasons as to why this is denied. I am ordering them in descending order of Importance.

~Firstly, your characters age shows a lack of comprehension of the Human-to-Mori years relationship. Please look back at it, identify your mistake and fix what is incorrect.

~Second, the size of the character does not fit with it's age what-so-ever. A 30mYear old Mori would never be nearly fully grown as you have described so far. The tallest Mori only reach heights of 6'3" or maybe in a very rare case 6'5-6" tall, on average it is more 5'4"-6' tall. The possibility of a child being 5' tall at 30mYears old is impossible.

~Finally, I am just going to tell you this bit of lore. During the ritual of birth the parents give the child both the public, and the private names. The priestess presiding over the birth as well as the parents of the child all know the private name before the child is even aware it has one, much less decide upon his/her own.

If you don't agree with my decision or you feel that I am wrong about anything I have mentioned feel free to PM me about this.

[Danny 2232]

Moved to the Great Library. It shall be sorted into appropriate category shortly.