RedMage App Form

[RedMage 0]

Out-Of-Character Details

Minecraft Account Name: Devinator19

How old are you?: 13

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: North American Eastern Time Zone

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?: Yes

Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?: Yes

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?: Yes

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?: Internet

Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft: No

Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? If not, post it here:http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-the-lord-of-the-craft-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r-100-unique-gameplay/!: No but I will

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is: Role Playing is a way to be someone different then yourself and express your mind and soul.

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is: Really getting into the role play I think.

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is: Getting into detail while you role play

In-Character Details

Character Name: Red Mage

Character Race: Human

Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary: I the RedMage have had a terrifying childhood how I got my name was my father Lord Eltire was a assassin for the king he taught me many things such as Dark magic, Simple magic, Alchemy, and as many things as a magic assassin can teach. One day In our chambers my dad was stabbed by a Black Warrior his blood stained against my training staff and from that day I vowed to use my magic for good and Kill the Black Warrior as deadly as possible. I was called RedMage for my Red Dagger on my Left Side that I wear to remind myself of what happened that day.

What are your characters ambitions?: To be Head Mage and to Kill the Black Warrior

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Is there anything else you would like to say about your character:

Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response? I would help him by donating some money for him and what ever he needs a favor for I would also give him advice on how to spend his money and how to turn it to even more.

You’re wandering the Oren Road late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. There is no help nearby, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do? I use a calm spell to calm the two down and then see if I could help them work out there differences.

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenceless man. What does your character do?: I would pick up the money make him a new bag give every Coin back and see If I Could help him with magic like healing his bone structure or even just give him my staff without the orb so he could use it.

[LeRenardNoir 413]

You were denied for the following reasons:

You cannot apply to the server with magical abilities. You must have an accepted Magic Application. Please add some server lore to your biography as a lot of what you said, you had made up. Also for your biography be sure to expand upon the length and flesh out your character more. Your Power Emoting and Meta Gaming definitions are both incorrect. Your Open Response Questions could really use some more detail. Be sure to add things like dialogue and actions. For your second Open Response Question, you cannot use Magic. It is also Power Emoting as you can not just calm people down with a spell. Good luck on your next application!

Please wait 24 hours before re-applying.

PM me if you would like further explanation/help.

While you wait…Go and vote for the server to support it!

We all would really appreciate it.

[LeRenardNoir 413]

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