[Denied]batyou1's Application 3

[batyou1 0]

Out-Of-Character Details

Minecraft Account Name:batyou1

How old are you?:16

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:California, United States

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?: YesHave you had any previous experience in roleplaying?:A small amount, I have liked the time I have been able to spend on it .

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?: Yes.

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?: I was looking for a proper minecraft roleplaying server.

Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/71255-batyou1s-application/ Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? If not, post it here:http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-the-lord-of-the-craft-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r-100-unique-gameplay/!: Minecraft Forums is at the time not sending me an email to validate the membership. So I can not post this as of now, sorry if this is an inconvenience.

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is: It is a type of gaming which you take on a seperate race and or class with the expectation of staying in character In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is: Using past experiences to change your decisions within a certain game, as in skyrim not using your knowlege to go back to a place you know with a special weapon because you have been there before.

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is: It is type of speech used to cause or describe a physical action or emotion.

In-Character Details

Character Name: Oike Bravebreaker

Character Race: Dwarf

Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary: Since young Bravebreaker could pick up a weapon in his strong grip he realized his want or some may even call it a need for adventure. As Bravebreaker grew so did his power and want to leave home, though his parents since they were both miners, very powerful in build and good at what they did, always tending to find gold in their mines and fellow dwarves who were also miners warned him otherwise. However one day while walking in the dark mines for the millionth time righght below his home born town of Aeriel, closing in on his 16th birthday he realized nobody should be able to hold him back. it was his life and he could do as he pleased with it.

Shieldholder since a young age proved to be a taller sided dwarf. Not as tall as a human approx. 5'2 but what he lacked in height to them he made up for in think muscle build. He has always been strong able to lift his shield from an early age and willing to use it also I may add. Although other may have looked down upon him for using such a defensive tool as a weapon it never stopped him, although also equiped with his homebound axe and armor (found of a dead adventurer he found in the mine.)He travels the world to help those he meets and adventure across all lands. What are your characters ambitions?: Bravebreaker has always wished to help other not as fortunate as himself but his main goal is to travel to every city, every mine, and every food stand in the land.

Please provide an

in-game screenshot of your skin here: http://imgur.com/TU8A7

Is there anything else you would like to say about your character: He is a kind fellow, please if you're out there and you see him coming your way, keep your weapons in your holster and yout judgement at the door.

Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in

the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response?I aproach him friendly as he is one of my kind. "Hello fellow dwarf long away from the mines I see." "Yes," he replies. "I am just doing what i can to survive now." "Well I shall buy some supplies from him with whatever coin I may have and head along on my jolly way" I say to the dwarf shopkeeper whose face seems just a bit brighter. "Thank you, please come again brother" the dwarf says as i walk away with my bag full of loot." Maybe me buying from him shall boost his spirits as well as attract some potential buyers to his shop.

You’re wandering the Oren Road late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. There is no help nearby, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do? As a dwarf myself I must step in to protect my dwarf brother. Surely no orc could possibly handle the combine force of to warriors as strong as dwarves he will either walk away at the sight of us to as most do, or he can die, "Ha you overestimate yourself dwarf" the orc says in his large deep vioce his kind have. At that moment I pull my shield and axe out and aim right ankle of the giant beast. The brutal orc stumbles backwards having been suprised by the sudden and quick movements, I now have cut into his leg sending him hard onto the ground, I pin him to the ground as the other dwarf pulls his axe far to late into the battle. "Do you submit and swear to let the dwarf go and harm no man as long as I stand for them?" the orc agrres with my steel axe pressed against his throat, then the orc walks away from the scene back towards home.

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenceless man. What does your character do?: Of course I stop and help the old man. "While thank you sunny" the old man says politely. Although he may not be aligned with my kind I could never leave such a man as him in such a position as that. "It is not of a problem, is there anything else you may need?" I offer to help find him a new walking stick or perhaps give him something in my pack to help him. I May pick up his coinds and give it back to him as for I can make my own such as he as probably done.

[Volutional 935]

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Although this was quite an alright application, I did see fault in the following places;

- Power-emoting isn't what you described. I recommend looking on the many guides on our Forums, or another website's.

- Your definitions in general could do with some examples.

- I would like to see more lore developed into your biography, showing more place names, or at least telling us specifically the age of your Dwarf.

Overall, a pretty good application, I wish you good luck next time. But please do not post for 24 hours as you will be denied for such.

[Volutional 935]

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