Genni's Second App Attempt

[Genni Isralker 0]

Out-Of-Character Details

Minecraft Account Name:GenoWhirl_SMRPG

How old are you?:16 Years old.

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:EST, United States of America

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?:Of course, I'm American, after all.

Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?:Yes, but not on Minecraft. See, I used to roleplay with my buddies on Facebook, and usually it was the sort of fantasy thing going on on this server.

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?:Yes, I have indeed.

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?:I've been looking for a good roleplaying server for quite a while now, and this one is the only one so far that I've seen where people take the roleplaying seriously.

[?]Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft:Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? If not, post it here: http://www.minecraft...nique-gameplay/!

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is:Roleplaying is the act in which people act as a character they made themselves, or are acting as a character from a movie or something of that sort. Roleplaying is hanging out with friends, going on adventures, and having a merry old time. They can take place in the past, present, or future.

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is:Metagaming is when your character knows something that they are not supposed to yet, as if they're psychic. Ex- If you see a nameplate in a building, you do not know if they are there until you can see their physical appearence.

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is:Power-gaming is doing something in-character without giving another roleplayer a chance to act upon it. Ex- You cannot emote saying "So-and-So shoots him through the head and kills him" because it is annoying, rude, and unfair completely.

In-Character Details

Character Name:First name- Genni (pronounced like Jenny) Last name- Isralker

Character Race:Human

Character biography -:

Genni has loved hunting and crafting since she was a young girl, though she will never kill a dog or cat, because she had a dog and a cat when she was young, but lost the dog when her old home burned down...the cat eventually died of old age.

Genni has light blue eyes, brown hair, and a silver hunter outfit with gray gloves. Genni is easily annoyed, cheerful, brave, and loyal to all of her friends. However, it takes a bit to gain her trust, so she often doesn't start a conversation with a stranger kindly, unless they are a merchant or shop owner of some sort. She loves singing, but feels very uncomfortable doing it in front of people.

She is 17 years old at the moment, and her birthday is July 1st.

When she becomes hungry, (zero hunger bar left) she changes personality from cheerful to grumpy, and will kill anything she knows will drop food, like cows, pigs, etc... Her personality becomes cheerful again once she considers herself satisfied. (four hunger bar at least).

Genni has had a very cheerful life up to this point, but one event will never leave her head- The day her house burned down!

Story

Genni and her younger sister (who she does not speak of for... personal reasons...) were watching the house while their parents were out.The two of them were each playing with one of the pets. Genni was with Sarken, her dog, and her sister was playing with Tentra, her cat. They were just getting ready to let their pets outside when a knock sounded from the front door. Knowing they were not allowed to answer, they ignored it. The two men outside who had knocked peered through the window, giving the girls a fright. One of the men broke down the door, ran in, and went straight for the chest, which her father had stored his potions in. " H...Hey! You can't take those! What are you doing?!?" Genni yelled angrily. She was 9 at the time, so she was very brave since she had never been in true danger before. Her sister was 4, and, of course, acted as if nothing was happening.Genni drew her wooden sword and hit one of the men in the head with it. The other man knocked her back against a wall, hurting her back severely. "OOF! Sarken... you know what to do..." she said getting up slowly. Sarken chased the men out of the building, and Genni was very pleased with Sarken. However, she did not know that one of the two thieving men had lit a fire on the roof, which spread quickly to the downstairs.

"Sarken!" she cried out, looking around frantically. To her sarrow, she saw Sarken burning behind the workbench. "...Sar...ken..." She was extremely upset, but she grabbed her sister and cat and ran outside, setting them down in the grass. "..." Genni looked down at the ground and began to cry for her dog.

What are your characters ambitions?:To kill all thieves, to avenge her beloved dog, Sarken.

Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here:Terribly sorry, my screenshot is not working right now, it is not allowing me to access the ones that i've taken... u can contact me through my profile on these forums if you know of another way for you to see it.

Is there anything else you would like to say about your character:Pretty much done right now...

Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response: (I walk up to the dwarf and examine his merchandise) "Excuse me, sir? Are you new in town, Dwarf?" I say to him. He looks back and replies, " Yes, just came here to try and make a living... not doing well so far though... would you like anything? It would really help me out..." I look back at what he has, and I see he has a stone sword for sale. "How much for this wonderful sword? I am in dire need of a weapon for my travels." "That sword? how about 10 minas?" "Great!" I say calmly. "Except one thing... I wish to donate 20 minas to you." The dwarf looks surprised and happy, so i smile and I give him his payment. I wave goodbye and walk away with the sword feeling quite happy.

You’re wandering the Oren Road late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. There is no help nearby, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do?: I walk up to the Orc angrily with a stone sword in my hand. " Excuse me, gentlemen, what seems to be the problem here?" The Dwarf, looking a little frightened, replies " This fiend has been on my back for weeks about some minas i owe to him, but I do not remember doing anything to owe him any of my hard earned minas!" The Orc looks back angrily, and says in a sinister voice- "You, lady, better scram before I come after you next. BEAT IT!" "I'm no mere "Lady" sir, and you have no right to pick on this nice Dwarf. Now, would you rather drop the case now, or let me defeat you in combat, completely humiliating your sorry being...?" The Orc is furious now, and replies " I would, but I prefer not to get my hands dirty. You, DWARF! This isn't over. This woman won't be around forever you know." He walks off. "That Orc is a few diamonds short of a block... Here, take this... you'll need it." Before the Dwarf could say anything, I'd already put my sword down in front of him, and walked off smiling.

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenceless man. What does your character do?: I look alarmed and I help him up. "Sir, that was quite a fall you had. Are you alright?" He nods thankfully. I give him one of my freshly crafted sticks to hold him up. "Oh, my minas... could you hand them to me please, young lady?" "Of course... there must be something around here to hold them in... ah, yes! My bottle." I pick up his minas and put them in the jar. I walk with him to his destination to make sure his stick doesn't snap again, and by the time we reach it, we'd talked enough to become friends.

ADDITIONAL APP INFO- I was going to try to add the colour back to the app, but I didn't want to screw up the spacing again, like I did the first time. I hope that it is now readable, as this is the style one of the forum moderators suggested I use, knowing how troublesome the forum's text layout can be, especially to a noob like myself. :oops:

[everblue2er101 906]

Your application has been...

Denied.

Need to post on the Minecraft Forums before you can be accepted.

There is no July in Asulon, it has a unique calendar. See the 'Time and Calenders' page of the wiki or more info. The hunger idea is interesting but not very RP - perhaps it can be changed so that she becomes different just when hungry without reference to the Minecraft mechanic of hunger. Please add some server lore to the bio, which can be found on the forums and wiki.

Killing all thieves is an unrealistic ambition that would require a Villain Application.

The screenshot can be sent directly to myself or uploaded to a hosting site. Use THIS GUIDE as a reference.

The Orc in the second Open Response Question would speak the Blah, not the common tongue.

I quite like this application. Hope to see you reapply soon.

Wait at least 24 hours after this post to reapply. If you have any questions feel free to send me a PM.