MC Name's Application

[azertyuiop 2]

Out-Of-Character Details

Minecraft Account Name: bentli14="#FF8C00"]How old are you?: 14 years old="#FF8C00"]Time-Zone/Country of Residence:timezone +1:00 Belgium="#FF8C00"]Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?:yes i do ,="#FF8C00"]Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?: no i dont="#FF8C00"]Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?:yes i dit="#FF8C00"]How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?: my friends told me about it="#FF8C00"]Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft:Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? If not, post it here: http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-the-lord-of-the-craft-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r-100-unique-gameplay/! :

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is: get to know other people and have fun="#FF8C00"]In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is: i dont know what this is="#FF8C00"]In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is: i dont know what this is="#FF8C00"]

In-Character Details a strong and feersome swordmanCharacter Name: john smith="#FF8C00"]Character Race: human="#FF8C00"]Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary: i am a man that lost evryting becouse of war after that he trained a lot and took his revenge on the people tha took his family and annyting else away from him he appearce calm but he is always angry about the past he is a friendly human male with a lot of skills and always ready to chruch the enemy he is 25 years old and on the piont of his strength ="#FF8C00"]What are your characters ambitions?:muziek and swordfighting and singing="#FF8C00"]Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here:i dont know how to make a screenshot but i look like a zombie pigman ok that is my skin="#FF8C00"]Is there anything else you would like to say about your character:no not really="#FF8C00"]

Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response?i would leave him alone and do not pay attention on the man becouse i dont want problems with annyone=#FF8C00]You’re wandering the Oren Road late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. There is no help nearby, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do?i would go there and see how the situation is evaluating if it goes to far i would chop of the head of yhe man that is treading the other bad="#FF8C00"]Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old manHis walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something,the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenceless What does your character do?:my character goes to the old man and help him to get of the ground if he is back on his feet i pick up all the minas coins and i just walk away and do not harm the old man i just steel all his minas/i]

[LeRenardNoir 413]

You were denied for the following reasons:

The formatting is almost unreadable, please remedy this. You need to know what Meta-Gaming and Power-Emoting are to be accepted. John Smith is an incredibly generic name, please think of one that's a tad more unique. Your biography needs to be expanded upon, make it at least two paragraphs. It was slightly contradictory when you said that your character was always angry yet was friendly. Expand greatly upon each of your Open Response Questions, add dialogue and actions. Treat them as a one paragraph first person narrative. In general, please spell check your next application as you had quite a few spelling and grammar mistakes. Good luck on your next application!

Please wait 24 hours before re-applying.

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We all would really appreciate it.

[LeRenardNoir 413]

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