Hitop1's 2nd Application

[Hitop1 2]

Out-Of-Character Details

Minecraft Account Name:

Hitop1

How old are you?:

12

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?:

Yes I have a great grip on English grammar and speak good English.

Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?:

Yes I do.

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?:

Yes I read all the rules and understand them.

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?:

I heard about this amazing server through my brother.

Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft:

I don’t have any links because they got deleted from Lord of The Craft.

Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? If not, post it here: No

http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-the-lord-of-the-craft-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r-100-unique-gameplay/! :

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is:

To use actions, attitudes, and communication, in a make-believe situation to understand a different point of view social interaction.

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is:

Meta-gaming is when you use out of game knowledge in the game. For example say that you see someone’s name plate in the distance your character cannot know who that is or if he is coming.

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is:

Power-emoting is the act of forcefully roleplaying. For example is I walk up to and *punch’s in the face knocking you out* you have no time to react. What should have happened is *ready’s fists * and then wait for the person to react with *ready’s fists * or *runs away *

In-Character Details

Character Name:

Finn

Character Race:

Dwarf

Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary:

Years ago in the land of Kal’Karik a little blonde dwarf was born, Finn Azram. Finn had great parents, Gorm Azram was his father and Helgar Azgram was his mother. Finns father was an inventor, he worked with redstone and set up traps and engineered gates and pretty much everything in Kal’Kariak. Finn knew that he wanted to be engineer just like his father when he grows up. So he practiced engineering doors and anything he can get his hands on really. At the age of 17 Finn engineered a pick that can never break, But everyone in the town denied the boys fancy pick and the preferred to mine with diamond picks instead. On Finns 20th birthday he received some special gear that his father had made for him, He got a pair of goggles crafted with the finest diamonds and the finest leather, Finn also got a special helmet made from the best iron and shiniest diamonds. He later told his parents he was ready to move out to explore all of Asulon. His parents ended up letting Finn leave to see the world of Asulon. This granted Finn with the power to do anything he wanted, make new friends, and go on daring quests. Finns frist night in The Wilds he ended up finding a nice little inn to stay at the people running were very nice to Finn, but the next day Finn would have to go on he was heading to Arethor to seek adventure. Once Finn arrived in Arethor he was starving and seeking a job. Finn did happen to stumble upon a food vendor who sold him apples and bread. Finn did not find a job but he knew must continue his ventures.

What are your characters ambitions?:

To find a job and become one of the most famous engineers around.

Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here:

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Is there anything else you would like to say about your character:

Finns adventures will take him very far.

Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response?

Finn looks at the poor dwarf Finn says, “Why hello there fellow dwarf I cannot give much but, I do have a plan. How would you like to own one of my never breaking picks? The man is pleased Well I shall start making you the pick right away. Finn starts working on the pick right infront of his shop. The dwarf leaves his shop for the night and returns home while Finn continues working. The pick was finally finished, Crafted with the finest logs and shiniest diamonds. In the morning when the poor dwarf came back, Finn gave him the pick the dwarf was very pleased. In return the poor dwarf gave him a ticket to the cloud temple.

You’re wandering the Oren Road late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. There is no help nearby, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do?

Finn knows he must help his fellow dwarf so he thinks of a plan, to throw peaice of his left over pork from dinner. So with out hesitating Finn throws his peace of pork on to the ground a couple feet away from the orc. The orc smells the fresh meat the orc quickly runs over to the pork to eat, giving the dwarf enough time to get away. As Finn is still in the trees as the dwarf hurrys away he yells “Thank You!”.

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenceless man. What does your character do?:

Finn knows he can use the extra minas but, he also knows it would be stealing and he can to jail for that. So bring as nice as Finn is he helps the man up and walks over to bench. The man is holding his bag of minas. Finn tells the man “Would like me to craft you a new walking stick?” the man nods. Being an engineer Finn uses the same mechanics that he did for his never breaking pick but due to low resources Finn only uses logs and iron. When he was finished crafting a new walking stick for the man, Made from the strongest iron and from the thickest logs it was finished. When Finn gave it to the man the man was very happy almost happier than can be. The man kindly enough rewards him with 50 minas. Finn was excited but he also felt like he did the right thing.

[mmat 7460]

• You need to expand on your second open response question. Also, Orcs are not rabid dogs, they wouldn't just get distracted by a thrown piece of meat.
  
  
• Some of your grammar and spelling still needs correcting.
  
  
• You must post on the Minecraftforum thread.

Try again in 24 hours.

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[mmat 7460]

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