[Denied]My Second And Better Application

[FlareGunCalamity 213]

Out-Of-Character Details

Minecraft Account Name:Flareblaze5678

How old are you?:16

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:USA

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?:Yes. English is my first language and i have a firm grip on the understanding of english grammar.

Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?:Technically, yes.

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?:I have read and understand your rules and think they are good.

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?:My Brother, who i hope you accept, recommended this server to me.

Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft:yes. i am sorry for this inconvenience.

Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? If not, post it here: http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-the-lord-of-the-craft-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r-100-unique-gameplay/! : yes

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is: roleplaying is using a game to act out a written or made up story. Usually, role-play is about adventure, romance, or tragedy.

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is:meta-gaming is using an external source to strategize for a game.

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is:Using a rp action against a player without their consent or agreement.

In-Character Details

Character Name:Ramona Safeli

Character Race:Marsh elf

Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary:On december 15, when Ramona was 2, her family was forced to flee their home to a strange and isolated island. perturbed by this change in her early life, ramona, already talking in sentences, went mute. she was mute until she turned fourteen, when in school, she passed by a chorus room and joined in on song. afterwards, ramona was a prized singer.

Ramona is 16 now and loves to sing whenever she can. she sings at dinner, in plays, at home, and everywhere. she is also a great artist. she is the opposite of shy and really kind. she is horrible at sword fighting but has a strong fist when it comes to combat. she trained in martial arts for 4, going on 5, years.

What are your characters ambitions?: becoming an opera singer for the royal family, and meeting her idols.

Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here:

Is there anything else you would like to say about your character:extravert. she likes pecan pie and mashed potatoes. she hates string beans and cooked fruits, and loves to sing and talk. she has a british accent on account of her birthplace.

Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response? Oh, what a poor thing. he looks like he could really use my money. being careful not to bump into anyone, i walk over.

"hello miss. would you like to buy something?"

"of course!" i say, looking at his wares. a painted china teapot catches my eye.

"how much is that lovely kettle?" i ask.

"name your price," he replies kindly.

i offer him a generous sum of money and take the teapot. he smiles at me and thanks me, and i go on my way.

You’re wandering the Oren Road late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. There is no help nearby, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do?now, i know orc aren't akin to reasoning, but this makes me mad.

"hey!" i yell out to him.

in his gruff voice, he replies, "what do you want?"

"thats not nice."

he aims a blow at my head but i dodge. and kick him in the shin, on a recent bruise. he aims another blow.

this time i run behind him and pull his collar, and he chokes.

"stop messing with people. its not nice"

i let go and he runs away.

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenceless man. What does your character do?: i gather his minas for him, and wrap them in a cloth. i tie the cloth with a string and set it on the ground. i help him up.

"are you ok sir?"

"I'm fine, but i need a new cane." he creaks.

i hand him his money and guide him to s nearby store.

after helping him inside, i find a cane, and pay for it.

after i hand it to him, he looks up at me and thanks me, but says no more then thanks and hobbles away quickly. feeling puzzled, i leave the store and continue on my way.

[LeRenardNoir 413]

You were denied for the following reasons:

Your cannot apply as a Marsh Elf. Please choose one of our races that we have in lore. Please include some Asulonian lore in your biography. December is not a month in Asulon. Your second open response question contains power-gaming and is unresolved. Please expand upon your meta-gaming and power-emoting definition. Other than that, fix up some grammar and spelling on your application. Good luck on your next application!

Please wait 24 hours before re-applying.

PM me if you would like further explanation/help.

While you wait…Go and vote for the server to support it!

We all would really appreciate it.

[LeRenardNoir 413]

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