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[vishman001 0]

Out-Of-Character Details

Minecraft Account Name: vishals01

How old are you?: 15

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: U.S. central time

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?: Yes

Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?: Kingdom of Aeonis server, which is now closed

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?: Yes, I have

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?: Google searches and from people from other servers

Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft: N/A

Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? If not, post it here: http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-the-lord-of-the-craft-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r-100-unique-gameplay/! :

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is: To assume the role of character and pretend to be that character

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is: To use information you hear when you aren't rping like in global chat, or in the real word

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is: Power-emoting is to use auto success actions such as a hit that successfully hits without the consent of the other player.

In-Character Details

Character Name: Joseph Williams

Character Race: Human

Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary:

Jospeh grew up in a family of farmers on the outskirts of the territory of the human kingdom near a large village. His family had a small ranch, with a large house in the center. At the age of 16 his parents died after a harsh winter in which they got critically ill; Joseph now inherited his family's farm, but with a bunch of siblings to take care of, he couldn't run the farm on his own. Eventually at the age of 18 he left his siblings with an old family friend in charge and left to gain wealth with which he could support his siblings. Joseph took the remaining money, just a few coins and headed out to find his fortune. This is where his story truly began.

At first Joseph tried labor work and he eventually became very strong from it. He constantly sent his siblings money. He was very successful, and intended to someday go to the village and set up a tavern, but his dreams died shortly after. Joseph one day, received a letter informing him that his family had been killed by bandits. They'd razed his farm and he now had nothing but the few coins he'd kept for himself. Joseph went into mourning and after the funeral decided it was time to go into the village for a better job, but fate had different plans for him. As he walked towards the village , he ran into a few bandits. In rage at what happened, he killed them with brute strength and slayed their heads. After which he skewered them on sticks and left them as a sign. Joseph then continued to the city, feeling a proud feeling. He thought he'd avenged his family. However, when he got to the village he discovered that the bandits killing his family was just a rumor. However, after further examination he discovered that that the fire wasn't caused by bandits. He found out later also, that the bandits he'd killed were just 3 poor kids a few years younger then him. He was now 20 and was still haunted by his guilt. He would do anything to do the right thing, just to make up for killing those 3 kids.

What are your characters ambitions?: To make up for killing the 3 bandits, and to open a successful business

Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here:

I can't get a ingame picture but I'll put the skin.

Is there anything else you would like to say about your character:

Nothing really left to say, I think Joseph is covered well in my backstory

Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response?

I would walk up to the dwarf and ask to view his wares. I always feel bad for the poor since I had lost everything when I was 18. I would ask him how business was and if there was evidence he was having economic troubles, then I would buy something just to give the man some money to survive.

You’re wandering the Oren Road late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. There is no help nearby, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do?

If I saw such an act of violence, I would defend the victim by first trying to break up the fight. If such a tactic didn't work... I would then try to intimidate the Orc and try to get him to back off. My final idea would be to attack the Orc and try to scare him off, but not injure him that badly.

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenceless man. What does your character do?:

Since I strive to do good, I would first help the man up and put him over my shoulder and then I would get the coins and carefully place them in my own pack. After, getting the man to a safer place, I would give him his coins and leave him to his own life. I wouldn't expect thanks, it's the least I could do to even start helping to make up for my sins in the past.

[everblue2er101 906]

Your application has been...

Denied.

Add some server lore to the bio, which can be found on the forums and wiki. Cannot kill the kids without a Villain Application, you might want to make it so that your character attacked and injured them instead.

Is there a hood or face covering on the skin? I can't make out any facial features.

Expand on all Open Response Questions. They should read as small stories, with one path of action and dialogue.

This is an excellent first attempt. I look forward to your next.

Wait at least 24 hours after this post to reapply. If you have any questions feel free to send me a PM.

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