[Denied][D] The Copy Of My App

[azertyuiop 2]

Out-Of-Character Details:

Minecraft Account Name: bentli14

How old are you? 14

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: belgium/meridiaan of greenwich

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language? Yes

Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying? Yes

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules? Yes

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft? friends in school

Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft: i dont know how to do this pls dont denie me for this

Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? If not, post it here: : yes

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is: Roleplaying is taking one’s state of consciousness from reality to a set fantasy and using that fantasy to dictate the actions.

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is: Meta-gaming is the act of crossing the boundaries of In Character and Out of Character knowledge.

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is: Power Emoting is essentially God-moding, or forcing a player character’s actions onto another player character thus taking away the ability of the affected character to create an original response.

In-Character Details

Character Name: anergeon

Character Race: human

what are your charecters ambitions:my characters ambition is swordfighting and noting else

Character biography:

on a morning anergeon was heaving some beacon for breakfest when a loud noise yelled heeeelp! anergeon went to the source of the noise but when he got there he was ambushed.he was imprisoned by the evil undead general.when he woke up he was in a small cage and he could see that his family was beiing slaughterd by the undead.he tried to escape to help his family and his village but the cage was to strong. so he saw his city burn and his family beiing slaughterd. when this was over the undead boss wanted to eat him alive but he could barrely escape out of the claws of the undead general and his army.

after a few days of running he came to a school the school of royal knights.becouse he was so weak he fainted on the stairs to the gate of the big school.when he woke up he saw an old man looking at him with a fronsed head.what are you doing here and where do you come from askt the man. anergeon awnsered the man and the man was trying to understand his awefull story.after he did this he asked the anergeon to join the royal school of knights and so anergeon joined the school.after a few years of intense training he went back to the village where his family was slaughterd and he slained the undead general and his army but when he got back all the students hated him becouse this was not the way of a knight and after a few weeks he was banned from the school of royal knights.nobody ever saw him again but there are rumors that he started a school of his own but noting is certain.

Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here:i dont know how to do this so i will give you a link to my skin on skindex: http://www.minecraftskins.com/skin/699063/captain/

Is there anything else you would like to say about your character: he is a good swordman he has a scar on the left side of his face and has a lot of hate and anger to the undead and all who follow them

Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your respons?:

as i walk by i hear a strong and sharp voice yell weapons and food for sale.at the moment i hear this i turn and look at the salesman and after seeing a poor man that is looking for a better live i approch.As i approch i see two man talking about a creature that lives in the mountain of tamriel but i just walk to the poor man and i ask how he is doing.the man tells me that he is okay and offers me to look at the objects he has for sale.As i am looking i see a shining sword the sword of light.I directly ask the man how much this sword costs. the man awnsers 500 minas i bought the sword and looked to buy some appels when i remembred that i needed to go home becouse i had to repair my armour and get some rest.

You’re wandering the Oren Road late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. There is no help nearby, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do?

i see the man fighting i remember me that there whas a strong wind coming from the north.because of this i could smell the scents of the man.i could just smell that they did not take a bath for a couple of weeks.after observing with my sharpt eyes i see that the man is going to lift his sword and on that moment i yell at the man and he looks at me.he yells at me hey you come hear.I come closer to the man with my hand on my sword.One of the man guards the little dwarf.The other man begins to talk to me.hey you what are you doing here ?where you spying on us he ? No sir i awnser.At this moment he tells me to walk away and that this is not my buisness.I tell the man that he has to leave the little dwarf alone.At this moment he wants to take up his sword to kill me but i was faster so with with one strong swing of my sword i chop his head off.the other man comes at me and our swords hit eachother kling klang but he was not a very good swordman so the fight was over soon.After slaying the two orcs i went to the little dwarf to help him.he is very weak so i give him a potion of regeneration to restore his health.after he is recovered he takes his leave and thanks me with a few minas.

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenceless man. What does your character do?

I see the man fall on the ground.I run to him and ask him if he is okay.The man tells me that he is sick and has to go to the pool of life in the dark forest.Without asking anny questions i go and seek for a stick that holds the man's weight and after awhile i finally find the perfect stick.I go back to the man that is still sitting agianst a tree.I pick up the gold and put them in a bag that i had in my inventory.The man thanked me and blessed me with a few words and asked me to go with him.Itold the man that i would love to come with him and so we both walk into the sunset.when we arrived the man said goodby to me and gave me a few minas for the trouble he has givin me so i take my leave and walk back home

[everblue2er101 906]

Banned from applying.

Parts of your definitions are identical to another application. Plagiarism is a serious offense on the Lord of the Craft. Given that there is plagiarism in this application and you have copied from other applications in the past, you are hereby banned from applying for three months. If you choose to reapply and plagiarize once more you will be permanently banned from applying.

Banned from applying for three months.

[Thu'um 530]

Moved to Denied Forum