[✔] [Accepted] [Pending][Elf] Yourmomminecraft 4Th Try

[YourMomMinecraft 0]

[b]Out-Of-Character Information[/b]
Please fill out the following questions as accurately as possible, and ensure the essential details are accurate.

Minecraft Account Name: YourMomMinecraft
How old are you?: 13
Time-Zone: Eastern Standard
Have you read, understood and agreed to the rules?: Yes
What previous experience have you had in role-playing?: Role-playing is my favorite thing to do in Minecraft
How did you hear about the the Lord of the Craft?: Google search engine
Link any applications that you have previously made for the server: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/82746-elf-yourmomminecraft-3rd-try/#entry713846
Have you posted this application on the Minecraft Forum? If not, then please do so (link above):
Have you read the Elven lore, and shall you ensure you make use of it and follow it in your biography?: Yes

Definitions
In your own words define the following terms. Do not take any definitions from elsewhere!:

Role-playing: Role-playing is carrying out a role as a certain character and never breaking character.
Meta-gaming: Meta-gaming is using information that you learned Out-Of-Character In-character. Example: Using someone's Minecraft username to call them over (The character would have no way of knowing that)
Power-emoting: Describing an act that doesn't allow the other person to react to. Example: *Stabs Steve in the back*

In-Character Information:
Complete the following biography on your character:

Full Name: Lenny Orchinwood
Current Age: 22
Sub-race (if any): Wood Elf
Past / History (include childhood, major-events, etc. 2+ paragraphs long): I grew up with my mother and father in Malinor. We were trading merchants so I wasn't home very much. I never really got a good education or combat experience. One thing I was good at was bartering for trades and farming. Our family wasn't wealthy, but we weren't poor. Nothing tragic or exiting happened that was life-changing, but when I turned 19, I decided to get my own house. I was still living close to my parents but not too close. 3 years later, I make a living off of farming and trading. I loved my parents a lot, but last time I went and visited them, somebody else was living in their house. My family moved without telling me. I don't know where they went, but I'm independent now so I wont try to find them. I'm going off on my own to be successful. And who knows? Maybe they'll come back soon...

      A couple days I turned 21, something special happened. I was farming and getting ready to trade my materials, but a man in a cloak that covered his face ran up to me and showered me with gold coins. I had no idea what was going on, so I picked them up and handed them to the man, but he ran away. Later that day, he came back with a woman, a young girl, and a young boy. I thought I knew who he was so I lifted his hood. My suspicion was correct. I cried tears of happiness as I rejoiced with my family once again.
Ambitions for the Future: Become a successful man by farming and trading
Personality: Nice, giving, athletic
Skills: Farming, bartering
Appearance (this must include an in-game screenshot of your skin):Wood elf archer                             
Any other details you wish to share about your character: Nothing much

[b]Open-Response-Questions[/b]
[i]Each question in this section must be answered with a minimum of one paragraph which must describe the event in full. Please be as descriptive as possible and do not break character or lore at any point.[/i]
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[b]1. As you walk through the deep forests you hear the sound of whispering and snickering. Upon inspection you realize that a group of High Elves are mocking a small Wood Elf child. How do you react?[/b]

Answer: I walk over and inspect further. They are making fun of him because of his grades in school. One of them says "Yer just a stupid weasel!" I walk closer and shout "Stop! He's just a boy." They all look at my and one says "And who are you to speak?" I reply in the kindest way possible "I wasn't a very bright one when I was young either, but what are ye gainin' from makin' fun of this poor defenseless child?" They realize what they've done and walk away, muttering.

[b]2. Whilst wandering through the Elven forests you come across a frail old man with a walking stick. He collapses in front of you, falling to the ground with a sharp thud. Out of his pocket falls a small pouch of gold coins, which hits the ground and splits open spreading coins across the pathway. The man lies there, defenseless - what do you do?[/b]

Answer: I walk up to the man and ask "Are ye okay? Ye came down pretty hard there." The man sits still, not responding. I pick up all of the coins and put them back in the pouch. I notice a not that fell out with an address on it, probably the place he was heading to. I pick him up, put him on my back, and start heading there. About halfway there, he wakes up and asks me "Who are ye?" I reply with "I am Orgoth, I high elf." I put the man down and give him his pouch. "Where am I?" he asks. I say "Ye fell down in the woods, I thought I might take ye to the address in the pouch since ye passed out when ye fell." The man replies "Thank ye Orgoth, I will be on my way now." He hands me 5 gold coins, and goes to the house.

[b]3. Whilst traversing the Elven Woodlands, you come across a small clearing in which a colored carriage sits. A trader stands outside of it and calls you over, telling you of his wares. He points out that his carriage sells just about everything, and that he's willing for you to haggle for a price. What does your character do? (Please include:- item, haggling for prices and the discussion involved).

Answer: I say "Me robe is a little dirty, ye got anythin' in there fer me?" The trader replies "I got some padded body armor in there if that's what yer lookin' fer" "That's perfect, how much do ye charge?" I asked "50 gold coins" The trader said "50 gold coins!? it's just a measly chest plate! I'll pay 25 gold coins fer it" I said. The trader replied "Oh, you ain't ever heard of emerald encrusted armor, have ye?" "No, why would ye encrust a chest plate with such a valuable mineral?" I asked "Legends say it gives you mystical powers. If you want it, it's 35 coins" The trader said. I reply "Deal." We shake hands and I recieve the item and pay for it. I walk away, but soon remember something was weird about that man. I couldn't put my finger down on it but then I realized and turned around and shouted "Father!" But it was too late, he was long gone.

[MonkeyCoffee 516]

Your application has been...

 

 

Put on Pending.

 

 

Don't worry, it isn't denied. I just wish that you fix one issue I found in your application:

 

 

I found your biography to be rather short. Please add another paragraph and include some more events that happened in your character's life.

 

 

 

Please fix this issue between 24 hours from this post or face instant denial, PM me when you have done so.

 

 

 

You fixed what I asked! Good job!

 

 

Please wait patiently for a GM to implement you. If you have any questions, pop me a PM!

[MonkeyCoffee 516]

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