[Denied][Application][Human] Worldiswar28 (Hayden)

[Fimlin 1997]

[b]Out-Of-Character Information[/b]
Please fill out the following questions as accurately as possible, and ensure the essential details are accurate.

Minecraft Account Name: worldiswar28
How old are you?: 14
Time-Zone: Eastern Standard Time (EST)
Have you read, understood and agreed to the rules?: yes
What previous experience have you had in role-playing?: i LOVE LOTR and glad i found this friends and i do alot of this stuff and im planing to open my own rpg server in may
How did you hear about the the Lord of the Craft?: my serv is temp shut down loked up RPG server after 5 attemps foun this
Link any applications that you have previously made for the server:
Have you posted this application on the Minecraft Forum? If not, then please do so (link above):
Have you read the Human lore, and shall you ensure you make use of it and follow it in your biography?: yes

Definitions
In your own words define the following terms. Do not take any definitions from elsewhere!:

Role-playing: when you be some one you arnt and stay to the character
Meta-gaming: when you are not in character
Power-emoting: when bad people use in game power to be mean

In-Character Information:
Complete the following biography on your character:

Full Name: Hayden of Haydroia
Current Age: 37
Sub-race (if any): Human
Past / History (include childhood, major-events, etc. 2+ paragraphs long): a long time ago he went down a river (the River of Haydroia) and grew up as a Ranger and wandered around and fought with many kingdoms before but he seeks his homeland far far away and no map for the kingdom is not even on the same coneninent as he and he dosnt even know of it himself. he now is a soldier in the Oren Empire but secretly still looks for his home and very rarely socializes
Ambitions for the Future:[/b] he plans to go back to his home but none know about it so his secret quest is a difficult one...
Personality:[/b] kind-hearted, prepared, cheerfull, strong, cunning, and can resist many ambitions of his own for others
Skills:[/b] great with a sword and bow, very little prefers one over the other it all "Depends on the situation"
Appearance (this must include an in-game screenshot of your skin):[/b] white with a slight tan, brown eyes and long dark brown hair. http://worldiswar28.imgur.com
Any other details you wish to share about your character:[/b] he is me on my oown server but i thought this would be a good story build for him

[b]Open-Response-Questions[/b]
[i]Each question in this section must be answered with a minimum of one paragraph which must describe the event in full. Please be as descriptive as possible and do not break character or lore at any point.[/i]
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[b]1. Whilst in the mighty human capital you notice a dark-clothed figure stealthily making his way towards the Emperor’s palace - he is clearly up to no good. There are guards within shouting distance - what do you do?[/b]

Answer: As i see the coverd man stalking I know he is up to no good and think that he'll run away if I shout so I tackel him straight down the mighty stairs and call for the guards once I relized what happend. I pinned him down and let go when the guards took him off to the jailhouse it seems and I look down and find a coin he dropped it was not of normal currency it seemed odd but I took it anyway for good luck.


[b]2. Whilst wandering in the deep oak forest you come across a large clearing, in which sits a small cobbled cottage. Outside it stands an unstable old man armed with a small iron blade, surrounded by two heavily armed bandits - they appear to be threatening him. You are armed with leather armour and an iron longsword, how do you react?[/b]

Answer: I approach them silently until i'm within around 2 yards and yell: 'What you two be up to, hurting this batterd old man?' and the taller one seeming slitly stronger than the other said: 'Go off and mind ya own buisness ranger!' and i said 'I am no ranger or soldier, i am a lost cause only doing what little I can to help' then I heard a man drawing his sword from behind. I grabb for my knife but he swings and I duck just in time and put a big cut down his ankle. He fell and bleed to death, then I drew my iron longsword (Alidir) and walked up to the other two. The tall one swung I swung back missed and kicked him down while off his guard and sliced his wrist open. The other simply jumped over the small porch railing and ran off twords what seemed to be smoke nearly a half mile away. I then walked to the man and gave him a extra gold coin i had found on the street.


[b]3. You are standing within the mighty human capital when you notice a small man standing behind a colourful stall. You approach the stall and notice that the man is selling a variety of general goods - he says that he is selling just about anything and that he has no set prices. He is willing to allow you to haggle and choose prices. What do you do? (Explain: your haggling, items of choice and the discussion that happens).[/b]

Answer: As I walk up to him I realize that he has a many asortment of goods and as his last customer leaves asks 'May I help you sir?' and I respond saying; 'whats one of your best sellers?' the vendor says; 'My golden apples, they are far beyond normal recipe and very uplifting however they do not last as long as the ones of old.' 'The gold apples of old were of a higher price then I can pay whether you posess them or not, do tell me how much are yours?' 'Well that depends on what you are willing to pay for it.' 'How about 13 gold coins ey?' 'Sure i supose that'l do anything else?' I look around and spot a bottle of Jagish Beer and say 'Pay ya 15 for that bottle and'... I look around and see a dusty old book and ask the vendor 'for that old book over there.' He not knowing what he's talking about turns and sees it and says; 'pay me 11 and get the book for free'  'sure and um.. i'd like... hm any weapons you sell?' 'Well i do have an old gold sword but its bent and broken hm.. well i have one bow known as Fala's Deiteri a fine bow indeed by my reckoning how bout 34 coins' 'Thirty four coins!' I am shocked for I very well know that is ridiculas. 'How bout 21 coins and ill pitch in this' I pull out a poutch of Ghast Tear. The vendor with a shocked look on his face says; 'pay me 16 and ill take that as well good day' he says as he hands me the bow and takes the coins and potch. I take the bow and walk away witha smug look on my face.

[ski_king3 0]

Under Review

 

 

In your previous roleplaying experience, you mentioned a lot of things which don't have anything to do with roleplay. Also, I hope you are aware that this is not an RPG server.

 

You did not post your application on the minecraft forums. The link to the correct forum page is here.

 

Your meta-gaming and power-emoting definitions are incorrect. You can find these easily on google, or on our wiki here. Please don't plagiarize.

 

Your bio needs a lot of work. Your grammar is bad, you used very little lore, you cannot come from a faraway land unless it is an accepted place in our lore. To the best of my knowledge, the River of Haydroia is not accepted in our lore. Overall, make it longer, and only use our accepted lore, and use a bit more of it.

 

Likewise, your ambitions from the future need to change.

 

Your personality and skills makes it seem that your character is good at everything. This shouldn't be the case. Your character should have somewhat limited skills, and should instead develop them in RP.

 

I'd like to see your skin without armour on.

 

Your ORQ's could use a lot of work. Your first one is too short, and you seem to overpower your enemies far too easily in the first and second ORQ. Your grammar could use quite a bit of work, and I would like to see more details in your ORQ's. Also, the server's currency is minas, not gold coins.

 

If you have any questions, feel free to PM me. You may reapply in 24 hours.

[ski_king3 0]

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