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OOC Information


 

MC Name: tuslwmonster


 

Have you read and fully understood Kharajyr lore?: Yes.


 

Have you read and fully understood the Kharajyr application rules?: Yes.


 

Do you understand and accept that the Kharajyr application team may revoke this application in the future if they deem it necessary?: Yes, and I encourage them to do so if I break character or RP badly.


 

Do you agree to both follow and uphold Kharajyr lore throughout your time in the Kharajyr?: Yes. Unless I see the ways of the Ape appealing, then I will apply as an Ape.


 

Tell us one unique fact about Kharajyr lore, culture or history that you know.(We will check for plagiarism!): One of the most interesting facts that I saw, was that, when a Kha kills another Kha, they will be killed. I found this interesting, because it's practically a double homicide, and could potentially be a never ending chain. And, yes I understand that a priest sacrifices the Kha that committed the murder, but what if that priest is 'unclean' he technically would have to be sacrificed aswell.


 

Sorry about that.. My mind never stops and I think into depth about everything..


 

Allow me to elaborate on this. Have you ever heard the phrase, "When the law does not do it's job, it's the community time to act?" That is what I'm thinking of, when I write this, because what if a Kha witnesses another Kha killing his friend, and kills him. What if that Kha was avenging his friend and did it for the right reason? Do you understand where I'm coming from now? :D


 

IC Information


 

RP Name (This includes your character’s prefix): Sa'Dess


 

Character Sub-race: Kha' Pantera


 

Character appearance (Including age and gender): Dess is a tall, thin Kha. He is about 6'5" and 165 pounds. He has jet black fur and wears a tan loincloth. Dess is 18 years old and is a male.


 

What is the personality of your character like?: Dess is shy but if you start a conversation with him or are nice to him, he will be loyal to you.


 

Brief Biography of this character’s life thus far (taking into account the rules against creating a character born outside of the empire):


 

Dess was born in a litter of 10, only 5 surviving. He was the first of his litter to open his eyes and explore. His parents watched with joy as he became strong and deadly. Dess had never touched a sword or bow in his life, because he relied on his own blades. He took great pride in his claws and would not let them yellow.


 

As he and his familly moved to Anthos, many of them we chopped down by disease and hunger. First was his mother. She grew very weary and sick. She traveled to the point where she simply could not walk anymore. Dess sent the rest of his family on, while he stayed behind with his mother, creating shelter and hunting for her. She stayed alive for about 4 days until one day when Dess came back from hunting. He saw her, leaning against a tree, with blood running from the corners of her mouth. He prayed to Metzitli to take him instead. He mourned his mother's death, but also envyed her. Dess felt horrible for envying his mother's death. He was also very sad, but he had to continue. He followed the signs of the Kha moving and arrived to his father at a resting place. Dess asked where his siblings were, and his father simply shook his head in dissapointment. Dess told his father about his mother, and his father broke down in sobs.


 

After a while, Dess and his father began to make their way to Va’Ranazjar when they were approached by two human knights in leather armor. The human called them apes and spit at their feet. Dess exposed his claws and his father drew a longsword. One of the human charged Dess with a small dagger pointed at his stomach. Dess grabbed the man's arm and dug his claws deep into his bicep. The man let out a scream and dropped his dagger. Dess swiftly cut the leather open, revealing the man's bare chest. Dess began to furiously claw at the man's stomach and chest. When Dess was finished, he dropped the lifeless body to the ground and began to gather his surroundings. The first thing he saw, was his father dueling with the other knight. He quickly ran over to help him. When Dess got to the duel, his father immeadietly yelled for him to run the other direction. Dess was so full of adrenaline, that his father had to repeat himself. When Dess caught his father's words, he turn the other direction and began to run, and run. He was far down the path to Va'Ranazjar in thick woods. He ran, and ran. Dess got sick and had to stop. He vomitted violently next to the path. The next thing he saw was the sky as he was falling back. He landed with a thud and everything went dark. Dess awoke where he had passed out, he had known this because of the strong scent of vomit. As he awoke and adjusted, he had realized that it was nighttime. He also noticed that he had a follower, but didn't show the knowledge.


 

Dess stood and began walking slowly down the path. He heard a twig break on the path behind him and turned around quickly, exposing his claws. There he saw a small Kha at about the age of 7. "What duu yuu want?", said Dess. The small Kha just walked passed him and stared straight ahead. Dess followed him and the little Kha never stopped. Soon enough, they reached Va'Ranazjar. When Dess went to said goodbye to the Kha, he saw nothing but a white bird perched in the tree.


 

 


 

Character’s ambitions within the Kharajyr: Dess wishes to become stronger than he is, and live his life for his parents and siblings. He also has a self- given quest to find the little Kha that led him to Va'Ranazjr.


 

Character’s strengths/weaknesses: Dess is very skilled in hand to hand combat, but he has never wieded a weapon in his life. He also moves very quietly. Dess is not a 'large' Kha, therefore the only possible way to protect himself would be using his stealth and agility. In anger, Dess will black out and not be able to control what he is doing, it is almost like he has a split personality with a terrible, terrible being.


 

Please provide a screenshot or 3D render of your character’s skin:

http://i.imgur.com/IwdR2IT.png?1
 

Situational Roleplay Questions


 

1. You are heading home from a successful hunting trip when a group of three heavily armoured humans jump out from behind a tree and start demanding the surrender of your catch over to them. Each man has a sword drawn and they are gradually pacing towards you... How does your character react?:


 

I stop dead in my tracks and steady my catch on my shoulder. As they near, I take off in a full sprint, holding my catch tight. I hear their armor clanging as they run slowly behind me. I spot an opening in the brush and brace myself, diving out. I look to the left, then the right. Behind me, I hear the humans yelling curses and calling for backup, and thats when I see more of them, also in heavy armor. I take off to my right, leaving the men in the dust. I look back and I see them nearing again, out of breathe, I drop my catch on the ground and raise my hands into the air. When the human arrive they pick up the animal and some of them carry it back the other way. Exhausted, I put my hands on my knees and bend over. I hear a 'Sheeennkk' as one of the men unsheathes his sword. I stand again, raising my hands and say, "I duun't want trouble." the man replies with, "Well, I want your head." Surprised, I make a weary dash past them, and deep into the woods. I look back and they aren't there. I let out a sigh of relief, and nap in a patch of weeds.


 

2. You arrive at the temple of Metztli only to see one of your closest friends stealing the sacred blue gems from the altar, a most unholy act for a Kharajyr. How does your character react?:


 

"Sha'luus, what are you duuing?"


 

"Huh..? Oh!!"


 

"Put them down."


 

"C'mon, I'll give you a cut!"


 

I expose my claws and once again tell him to put them down. He refuses and keeps the gems that he has and runs. I grab his robes and pull him back. The gems fly out of his hands and scatter across the floor. Hurriedly, I begin to pick them up and he grabs the back of my neck and throws me backwards, into a bench. I wince as I smash into the bench. I scramble to get up and charge him. My charge connects as I tackle him to the ground. I sit on his chest and begin to shout for help. He quickly reacts and rolls me over, smashing my face with his elbow. I double back and fall to the ground. He stands over me, sword drawn and says, "It's been great friend, but you aren't sto-" he gags and sputter and falls to the ground. When he falls, a spot a Kha' Tigres behind him and he nods to me. "Thank yuu." I say as he walks out.


 

3. You are in the Cloud Temple when a stout, angry little dwarf begins yelling highly racist terms towards you at the top of his lungs. Although unarmed, the dwarf continues to yell after he makes eye contact with you. How does your character react?


 

I look at the dwarf and simply chuckle, seeing such a small man with such a large voice. He yells and asks me what I'm laughing at. I reply with a smart comment and he begins to walk towards me, asking me if I want to fight. I shake my head and apologize. He says, "Oh, what? Little kitty scared?" A few of his other friends join in on the razzing and I become highly uncomfortable. As I begin backing away, a strapping Kha' Tigres approaches me and looks at the dwarves. He insults the dwarves in a language that I don't understand and they grumble, walking away. He asks me if I am alright and I simply nod, not knowing myself. I reassure myself that I am okay and go back to my prayers.


 

4. Fire has broken out over the jungle city and you can hear the screaming of two Kha’ nearby. As you go investigate, you notice that one of your friends and the Tlatlanni’s white-furred child have gotten themselves trapped in opposite ends of a burning building. The roof creaks above you, if you were to get involved, you would only have time to save one before the building collapsed. How does your character react?


 

I panic, running down the hallway towards the Tlatnni's child. I have a thought in the back of my mind pounding that I have made a mistake, but the rest of my mind says, "Save the pure one." I crash into the door and a burning beam separates me from the child. I hear the child sobbing. I panic again, leaping over the burning beam. I see the child laying on the ground, his right leg mangled. I know I cannot leap the beam with him in my arms, so I hack at the beam with the poker from the fireplace it splits easily, and I lift the child, sprinting towards the entrance. Thats when I spot my friend, pinned under a charred beam. He lifts his head and smiles, seeing me. I shout to him that I'd be back for him. I continue running through the foyer and out the front door. I lay the child on the ground, carefully, and run towards the building again. I stop as it crashes to the ground. I drop to my knees in disbelief. I can't speak, just stare. The Tlatanni walks up behind me and thanks me multiple times. I nod once, and begin to sob. I don't leave the building until about three hours later, after I leave, I can do nothing but wander around town.

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I am going to need you to change your character's name.  I see you refer to yourself as Dess, and thus I shall say this:  You may not have a last name as a Kharajyr unless you are a member of a pride, which must be arranged with another member of said pride.  Thus the name Karn on the end of your name does not make sense.  The prefix Zan is not a prefix in Kharajyr culture, for a list of prefixes, please look in the updated social class lore found in the Kharajyr OOC section.  PM me once this is changed, and I shall continue reviewing.

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Accepted

 

Welcome to the Kharajyr.  I shall try to guide you to the island.  PM me if you wish to be added to the Kharajyr Skype group.

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Moved to the Great Library. It shall be sorted into appropriate category shortly.

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