[Denied]My App To Lotc

[azertyuiop 2]

 

 

[human]

 

Out-Of-Character Information

Please fill out the following questions as accurately as possible, and ensure the essential details are accurate.

 

Minecraft Account Name: prokiller5

 

How old are you?: 15

 

Time-Zone: (GMT - 4:00 hours) European time

 

Have you read, understood and agreed to the rules?: Yes, I have.

 

What previous experience have you had in role-playing?: A few other RP Minecraft Servers.

 

How did you hear about the the Lord of the Craft?: Youtube and friends

 

Link any applications that you have previously made for the server: 

 

Have you posted this application on the Minecraft Forum? YES I HAVE If not, then please do so (link above):http://www.minecraft...0#entry22454080

 

Have you read the Human lore, and shall you ensure you make use of it and follow it in your biography? yes

 

Definitions

In your own words define the following terms. Do not take any definitions from elsewhere!:

 

Role-playing: Role-playing is immersing oneself into the specific role of a character. Taking on their characteristics, emotions, skills etc. 

 

Meta-gaming: Using of OCC (Out of Character) knowledge in character or RP. For example, I if I acquired knowledge of a gathering among members while OCC and I then used that knowledge to turn up at this gathering as if I knew that it was going to take place. This is wrong because my character did  not gain such knowledge in game.

 

Power-emoting: Forcing an emote that is over powered onto another player,making it very difficult or even impossible when attempting to counter attack. For example, *Helv unsheathes his sharpened blade and fiercely swings it slicing off everyone's head with incredible ease

 

In-Character Information:

Complete the following biography on your character:

 

Full Name: Hadvar Cratan

Current Age: 25

Sub-race (if any): Northener

Past / History (include childhood, major-events, etc. 2+ paragraphs long):

 

Hadvar was a simple woodcutter that worked with his father at least until his mother died and his father got sick.He was just a nine year old boy when he saw it the first time.A dark shade that was terrorising him in his dreams.First he tought he was just dreaming but it seemed that the injuries he accuired during a confrontation with the shade he also accuired this exact same injuries in real life.After a few months he saw the dark shade outside his dream.It was looking at him from a dark spot in the forest.He was scared but he still went to sleep.When he woke up in the morning his parents where gone and there was a message written on the wooden wall saying "thank you for releasing me. I already got your family now i wil come for you." This was the last thing he ever saw of his family. But he knows that there souls are still in this world. Hadvar has spend an awefull lot of years finding this corrupted soul and trying to clean his family's soul's.Will he ever succeed?

     

Ambitions for the Future:Hadvar wants to build a great nation and training school to fight the demon that killed his parents,train his skills,and mary a good girl and get a family of his own one day

 

Personality:becouse he has been true so much already he has problems trusting people.He medditates to keep himself under controle but he can get very angry when he has to.

 

Skills: medditating,melee fighting,using heavy armour

 

Appearance (this must include an in-game screenshot of your skin):http://www.minecraftskins.com/skin/1494493/guardian-captain/

 

Any other details you wish to share about your character: he has a nice dog called max.

 

Open-Response-Questions

Each question in this section must be answered with a minimum of one paragraph which must describe the event in full. Please be as descriptive as possible and do not break character or lore at any point.

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1. Whilst in the mighty human capital you notice a dark-clothed figure stealthily making his way towards the Emperor’s palace - he is clearly up to no good. There are guards within shouting distance - what do you do?

 

Answer: Hadvar looks around.Suddenly he sees a dark-clothed figure that looks sucpicious.He sees guards but he wants to deal with the person himself.so he follows theperson up the roofs down the sewerswhen suddenly he sees that he is climbing up the  Emperor’s castle.I quickly follow him and see that he has a knife. When i finally got on top of the castle i see him entering a room.Iquickly persue him and when i enter the same room i see him hanging over the  Emperor.I quickly grab his knife and stab him a couple of times with my iron sword. When the guards come in and the emperor awakes they thank me and i take my leave back home.

 

 

2. Whilst wandering in the deep oak forest you come across a large clearing, in which sits a small cobbled cottage. Outside it stands an unstable old man armed with a small iron blade, surrounded by two heavily armed bandits - they appear to be threatening him. You are armed with leather armor and an iron longsword, how do you react?

 

Answer: As i am walking the road i see two bandits threaten a little man. Without thinking i grab my sword and go closer to the bandits.The bandits look at me and start to come closer. Iprepare for battle and swing my sword but my sword was a bit rusty and it broke. oh no i thought what now. The two bandits grabbed me and told me to give them all my money.I quickly grab a stone and smach it against his head.The first bandit goes down with the stone still in his head he hits the ground and is dead  .the second bandit is furious and attacks me non stop but when he wanted to give me the final blow sudddenly he stops and hit the ground.With a knife in his back he yells and dies right on the spot.I see the old man and i thank him for helping me. I take my leave and return home.

 

3. You are standing within the mighty human capital when you notice a small man standing behind a colourful stall. You approach the stall and notice that the man is selling a variety of general goods - he says that he is selling just about anything and that he has no set prices. He is willing to allow you to haggle and choose prices. What do you do? (Explain: your haggling, items of choice and the discussion that happens).

 

Answer: i see a man yelling fresh apples for onlyv2 minas. I like apples so i entend to buy a few.When i arrive at the man i tell him to name a price for 8 apples. The man thinks a little and awnsers 20 minas.Oh no i dont think so a minute ago you where yelling two minas per apple and now you charge me 20 minas. I will only give you sixteen. OK? No i want 20! Ok than i will take my leave. A few seconds later i hear him yelling NOOOOO WAIT OK  MINAS THAN!!! Good choise i tell the man. Yeah yeah dont spot with my boy.I awnser I would'n dare old man and i take my leave to head back home.

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You copied all of your definitions from this denied application "http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/88213-human-helvetica-mercury/."

 

You copied both the meta-gaming, power-gaming, and role-playing definitions from his application. Plagiarizing is a serious offense on Lord of the Craft and we do not tolerate it.

 

You may reapply on June 20th. 

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